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I Am But Her Puppet

Her gaze, like daggers of light pierce my body, releasing life, allowing her the sight of my undying weakness. It is she that pulls the strings which make this man move as if controlled, manipulated, just like a marionette. Yes, I am an inert piece of wood, only given life when she looks upon my being, accepting me, allowing me, to forever be, just me. I dance for her and the smile she emits is the very source of my new found smile, that will forever remain carved into the once hard wood of my face. There’s a new force within the cavity of my being. It pounds as if wanting out but perpetuates as the fuel for my wanting even more. I come alive this evening and will forever remain grateful and in debt to the angel that brings me from the pile to the light of incandescent life that heats, but never burns.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/15/2008 9:37:00 PM
written with so much honesty and passion! Great write! with much respect and adoration, GiNo,18
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Date: 7/15/2008 9:31:00 PM
great job... love it. it really show what a man will feel when he is in love.
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Date: 7/15/2008 7:48:00 AM
really enjoyed this piece looking through the puppets eyes - great job on this
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Date: 7/15/2008 4:25:00 AM
A beautiful portrayal, full of imagry and personification to forward your thoughts, I love that. VERY well done my good friend, I loved this one, a piece of wood puppet, lovce that analogy. :) Kristin
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