I Am But Her Puppet

Her gaze, like daggers of light
pierce my body, releasing life,
allowing her the sight 
of my undying weakness.
It is she that pulls the strings
which make this man move 
as if controlled, manipulated,
just like a marionette.
Yes, I am an inert piece of wood,
only given life when she looks
upon my being, accepting me,
allowing me, to forever be,
just me. 
I dance for her and the smile
she emits is the very source
of my new found smile, 
that will forever remain carved
into the once hard wood
of my face.
There’s a new force within 
the cavity of my being.
It pounds as if wanting out
but perpetuates as the fuel
for my wanting even more.
I come alive this evening and
will forever remain grateful
and in debt to the angel
that brings me from the pile 
to the light of incandescent life
that heats, but never burns.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Young Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 9:37 PM
written with so much honesty and passion! Great write! with much respect and adoration, GiNo,18
Cordova Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 9:31 PM
great job... love it. it really show what a man will feel when he is in love.
Jordan Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 7:48 AM
really enjoyed this piece looking through the puppets eyes - great job on this
Reynolds Avatar
July 15, 2008 at 4:25 AM
A beautiful portrayal, full of imagry and personification to forward your thoughts, I love that. VERY well done my good friend, I loved this one, a piece of wood puppet, lovce that analogy. :) Kristin
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