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I Am a Swan

I was born one day with the glistening sun. Mom says I am her baby and I have a name; One of twelve called Cygnet born amongst leaves, Dad has taught me how to swim and in two days I could. I am not much to look at right now, But one day I will be a majestic trumpeter swan; With white elegant plumage, powerful and graceful, All day we drift on a slow, undisturbed wetland marsh. Mom and Dad showed me how to submerge. I love to eat underwater plants and small fish; Life so far has been peaceful but one day I will fly. I weep when I think of leaving my beloved swan family; Silently we float along in harmony and love, But I am just a little baby dreaming in the nest; Just a baby who loves his truly beautiful Mom and Dad. Oh, and I love my siblings too and the other drifting swans. _______________________ May 9, 2015 Poetry/Personification/I am a Swan Copyright Protected, ID 05-671-642-09 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Swan meaning - true beauty, power of self, love, grace Written for the Standard contest, Picture Yourself a Bird, sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged 2015 Fifth Place

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Date: 5/26/2015 12:34:00 PM
Hi Broken, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for your lovely swan poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this sweet write, BW! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:16:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome Bird win @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/24/2015 4:22:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/23/2015 11:12:00 PM
Wonderful poem... SKAT
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Date: 5/23/2015 10:31:00 PM
I like this, "But one day I will be a majestic trumpeter swan", congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:55:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your wonderful win hugs eve
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:35:00 PM
This is a sweet one, dear. And I love the picture you put with it. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/16/2015 1:16:00 PM
What a well writt poem.You told the story of baby swan really good. Best of luck in the contest.-Alexis
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Date: 5/15/2015 8:43:00 AM
Beautiful imagery of the baby swan you are so talented , I really enjoy reading your work. Hugs and a 7
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:46:00 AM
Lovely write :).Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:43:00 AM
Jan's right, a nice languid flow. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 5/10/2015 9:41:00 AM
Excellent! I expect it will do well.
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Date: 5/10/2015 8:14:00 AM
Such a beautiful bird to portray Broken wings such a lovely flow I agree with Eileen I love the way you have made this with a family aspect to it - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 5/10/2015 3:24:00 AM
Good to read about the life of a little swan. It was a lovely write, Constance. Good to know the meaning of Swan, as well. I love the family feel you gave to your write. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/9/2015 11:20:00 PM
With a gentle flow this poem drifts into my heart and nestles softly there. A beautiful piece. 7
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Date: 5/9/2015 10:52:00 PM
Harmony and love -- dear friends and I will think of your words the next time I see swans floating upon the water. 7
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Date: 5/9/2015 7:16:00 PM
Oh how lovely this poem is Constance. It is filled with serene pleasure when visualizing your charming words. I hope Andrea likes it as much as I do! 7
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