Gerard Keogh Jr. | + Follow Poet |
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I Also Envy Your Travelers' Miles, Mr. Bumblebee.

Buzzing bee, keep the sun in your sights,
packing nectar down snug in your tights.
So adroit at your task
that I just had to ask:
" Is that dinner on all of your flights?"

Copyright © Gerard Keogh Jr. | Year Posted 2010

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/7/2010 6:16:00 PM Congrats Gerard on your big win in the Limerick contest.. good one my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory..happy weekend..luv.. Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 8/7/2010 10:33:00 AM congrats on your win with this witty entry Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/7/2010 3:51:00 AM Congrats on your win, Gerard Login to Reply

Sidney Hall Mad Poet Date: 8/6/2010 12:32:00 PM Nice one Gerard. Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 8/6/2010 11:54:00 AM Congratulations on your very clever llimerck. And your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 8/6/2010 11:31:00 AM This one is unique in that it shows a fact concerning how the bee navigates. Congratulations Gerard, on your success. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/6/2010 10:26:00 AM Congratulations, Gerard, and yes, I have a darker side to my poems, I just don't show it as often. haha. See my poor doggie poem. If i were not in a rush, I'd look for a poem of yours i've not seen. have a great Friday. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 8/6/2010 10:08:00 AM Nice one Gerard, if it's a great summer I dare say there is food on all of their flights. Many congrats, have a lovely weekend >> James Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 8/6/2010 8:53:00 AM Congrats, Gerard. Nice going. Ralph Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/6/2010 8:34:00 AM Congratulations Gerard on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Are You Bugged". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/6/2010 8:32:00 AM John and I both loved your poem, Gerard. Congratulations on placing second! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Date: 8/6/2010 8:28:00 AM Got a chuckle out of this one. Thank you for sharing it with us. I'm smiling! Karen Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/5/2010 7:46:00 PM Corrections made on the Maid, the Magpie & the Mirror THANK YOU!You have Yakety & Charlie brown Light & Love SOUP MAIL Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/5/2010 6:39:00 PM Great entry ..good luck in the contest.. I opted out of this one as bugs are not my thing Gerard..haha.. so am so busy like your bumble bees these days.. going to Italy for business purposes and will honeymoon there.. we both have been there before and have friends who are giving us a villa for the two weeks we will be there... only hope customs does not confiscate our cell phones as foreign countries seem to be doing these days.. protocol... luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/4/2010 5:29:00 PM very cute and "sweet" as honey, Gerard. Gosh, that bumblebee is so popular in this contest and I am so "ticked" off I did not see to enter it in time. thanks for your kind comment on my versatility, and I am sure it can also be said of you! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/4/2010 2:24:00 PM Soup mail. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 8/4/2010 11:20:00 AM Hehe, I love this light hearted write Gerard, thank you for your comment as well.. Glad you like the word splodges, tc Wilma Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 8/4/2010 11:08:00 AM Very nice Gerard. Should win it all. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 8/4/2010 10:54:00 AM adorable, love it, good luck in the contest Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/4/2010 10:50:00 AM lol cute one , enjoyed your write..P.D. Login to Reply