I-W-B-S-G

I.W.B.S.G. It Would Be So Great If she could feel It Would Be So Great If she had a strong will It Would Be So Great To avoid the hate It Would Be So Great If shad a little hope It Would Be So Great If she hadn't lost faith It Would Be So Great Not to get lost in a mental state It Would Be So Great To find herself again It Would Be So Great If she had true friends It Would Be So Great If you know who you are? Skat POEM

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/20/2017 8:16:00 AM

You have been here a long time. Hopefully you will start writing again an adding flavour to the soup.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2015 9:16:00 AM

Skat , am out the door in 15 min. I feel like Linda Sweetheart when she was posting blogs even at the time she said she was marrying in a few minutes. hahaha. Remember that!! I'll miss ya, lady!!! But maybe I will be on here from my in-laws! Oh, and I like seeing this poem again! Nice and short ones are my faves!

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 6:50:00 PM

.. This poem needs work, sorry for the rude interruption, I will make changes during the summer, if you want to lend a hand please send soup mail to my inbox, I was beginner when I posted this poem..... HUGS SKAT. ...

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 6:49:00 PM

this is awful...lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/14/2013 11:55:00 PM

Hi, SKAT!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 12:11:00 AM

no!

Edmond Ornelas

Date: 9/4/2012 2:44:00 PM

Congad. very strong poem Hope she finds herself

Good Night

Date: 9/3/2012 8:21:00 PM

gud poem its harde to find oneselfs nice job

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/30/2010 4:32:00 PM

all of these things would make someone into a completely different person.being negative about everything will get you no where.have a great day Irma, -Always&Forever Lynette

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/25/2010 7:21:00 PM

very cool indeed! Irma! had fun reading this art! jimbo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2010 7:13:00 AM

and this is a GREAT read, as always, Irma. About the Brian in my limerick, he is not a real big friend of mine, but just a nice guy in another poetry group who I noticed sometimes liked to offer advice to the ladies when they had problems. luv, Andrea

Royal Trevino

Date: 3/6/2010 6:14:00 PM

it would be so great!! good write irma... enjoyed