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Sweet love sweet taste of your lips Lavished expressions turn my heart into an eclipse Distant echoes vibrate your pulse I am consumed by your aura and can’t think of anything else Just the mere sound of your voice I fall into a silent lovers rejoice Left over scents on hats Coffee cups with rings of black Dazzling love oh hear me call To what is this causing my heart to be enthralled? Be it dark or be it light Sustaining the loveliness and its blight Dance away now I shall dance so high Feel the enchantment of your love tempting me sigh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/1/2009 4:37:00 PM
Awe, love this write Laura. Love, love, love....
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Date: 2/1/2009 12:44:00 AM
Just love that last couplet Laura.Beautiful sonnet.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/31/2009 7:08:00 AM
Laura, love is in the air, and everywhere else : ) as you capture so well here. Sigh, is right! Lovely to read! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/30/2009 8:00:00 PM
The sentiment in this sweet poem is so endearing, Laura. I love the lines "I fall into a lovers silent rejoice" and the closing line. Both represent those feelings so well. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Love, Robin
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Date: 1/30/2009 5:33:00 PM
Well done, Laura. Loved the line about the coffee :) nice addition! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/30/2009 4:40:00 PM
Well written it caught my eye and kept my attention.
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