Hypnotic Twister

turbulent dark wind...
tasmanian devil cloud...
rotating descends…



2-13-17
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La France Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 2:04 PM
Cheryl you have penned a nice image
Hoffman Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Thank you so much for kind comment and visit Broken Wings!~Che :)
Stebbings Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 2:25 PM
Excellent visual Haiku. Cheryl. // Barry
Hoffman Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 7:01 PM
Thanks so much for kind comment and visit Barry!~Che :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 1:21 PM
You nailed those twisters alright, Cheryl. An excellent haiku. Kudos to you for such a brilliant write. A 7 and a fave. Cool double combo. Love and hugs to you.
Hoffman Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 7:00 PM
You are very encouraging Freddie! Thanks for kind comment and visit!~L & hugs~Che :)
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February 13, 2017 at 2:05 PM
- A great haiku, Cheryl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 13, 2017 at 8:53 PM
Thanks so much for kind comment & visit Anne-Lise!-hugs Che :)
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February 13, 2017 at 8:45 PM
Thanks so much for kind comment & visit Anne-Lise!-hugs Che :)
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