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Hypnotic Eyes


Hypnotic are your eyes in light
of sun and stars and luring moon.
Eyes crystal blue flame coldest night
then look away as lovers swoon.
Like them, I long to lose my head
and heart to love, not just a game.
Enlightened by a kiss, we'd wed,
a charmed new life with a new name.

My feet tread soft, my blood burns deep.
I scour for deeds to draw you near.
Unheeded, this beguiled soul weeps.
I've failed to sway your heart, austere.
Caress me with hypnotic eyes.
if love's a dream, I'll fantasize.   

Written 2/10/17 for Form H Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/6/2017 7:57:00 AM
I'm glad I read this one a thoughtful piece.
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Date: 2/18/2017 9:24:00 PM
Loved this poem and congratulations..this is a form I'm not familiar with..well done
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Date: 2/18/2017 2:25:00 PM
Hi Rhonda: Beautiful flow that blends theme with the perfect chosen form. Congratulationslatios on your win. Hugs. SuZ
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Date: 2/18/2017 1:36:00 PM
Rhonda congratulations on your win in my contest with this great write
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Date: 2/18/2017 8:58:00 AM
So well done and deserving entry, congratulations Rhonda...
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Date: 2/18/2017 8:04:00 AM
Beautifully done, Rhonda. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/12/2017 2:23:00 PM
Awesome flair with this form, Rhonda. I really have to get moving on this one too. I just know B.W will love this.
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Date: 2/11/2017 11:41:00 AM
A stunning write, Rhonda! Passionate, romantic and I love the flow and rhyme. The last two lines are perfect! Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 2/11/2017 8:23:00 AM
This is very hypnotic well done I like the flow, moving, poetic, I love it x
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Date: 2/10/2017 9:57:00 PM
Oh my, how romantic, as I drink my glass of red wine, ok ok you caught me, my second, I really enjoyed this write!
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