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entrancing wind chimes where she plays with autumn’s breeze... her tinkling laughter - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Contest: Form H with a Theme Sponsor: Broken Wings Placed 2nd © 9th February 2017

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/20/2018 10:58:00 PM

Ohh such an enchanting and musical Haiku Paul. I love wind chimes and I love this write. Captivating and sensuous. I can hear her laughter floating on the wind.. Just beautiful. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 1/21/2018 10:50:00 AM

I love your lovely and generous comments, Susan...thank you! ~ Warm regards // paul

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/6/2017 12:52:00 PM

Hello Paul. Wind chimes are hypnotic. Your entry stayed true to the format in count and voice and tone. You give nice imagery. Well done

Paul Callus
Date: 3/6/2017 3:49:00 PM

Thank you for the delightful critique, Lisa; a pleasure to have you stopping by:) Regards // paul

Carole Duet

Date: 2/20/2017 5:52:00 PM

I like this, Paul, although I'm not usually into haikus. This one is different though. I like the way you used the sense of sound so superbly. Congrats on your placement in the contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/21/2017 11:13:00 AM

I like your sincerity and lovely feedback, Carole...thank you! Regards // paul

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2017 1:24:00 PM

Paul congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem and I love the images too

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2017 4:03:00 PM

Always a pleasure to take part in your contests, Constance; they are usually a fount of inspiration. Thank you for placing this entry high on your list. Regards // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/18/2017 8:42:00 AM

Lovely win Paul, congratulations....

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2017 4:01:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie. Your winning entry was equally lovely! Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/18/2017 7:54:00 AM

Coming back with congrats on your win.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2017 4:00:00 PM

A second visit is always appreciated, Agnes, so are the congrats :) Thank you. // paul

Joseph May

Date: 2/18/2017 3:14:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2017 3:25:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. Regards // paul

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/18/2017 12:49:00 AM

I love the imagery, Paul, and the word, tinkling, is just perfect...thanks for your visit today. I've been back for a couple weeks, slowly getting back into the PS groove. It was hard for me to stay away for so long, but I had no choice. Life is running smoother now. I hope you're doing well too. Hugs, Rhonda

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2017 10:49:00 AM

Thank you for a most pleasant visit, Rhonda. Pleased to know that life is running smoother. We all have problems, but some have more to put up with than others. Take care...hugs // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 2/17/2017 10:42:00 AM

Magnificent Senryu, Paul, fantastic imiagary a 7 Hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2017 1:12:00 PM

I love your comments, and the high rating, Eve. Thank you. Hugs // paul

Red Fiery

Date: 2/17/2017 12:53:00 AM

and it rings through my years...wonderful haiku ! I wish you all the best ! You are surely a winner with this ..7/7 and a fav..~Love ~ Red

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2017 8:10:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comments and generosity, Red! Very much appreciated :) Love & hugs // paul

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/16/2017 3:11:00 PM

Love this, Paul! Glad you took the same theme as I did...it was a challenge to me!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2017 8:08:00 AM

Thank you, Laura. The shorter the forms are, the more challenging they become! The writer has few words through which to express him/herself. Regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 2/14/2017 3:27:00 PM

Wonderful Paul. The picture adds so much to this piece. Excellent. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2017 10:25:00 AM

Thank you, Judy. Glad you enjoyed it. Blessings and warm regards. // paul

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/14/2017 12:37:00 PM

I agree w/Agnes. Beautifully done, Paul. A very charming haiku. Tinkling laughter is such an expressive image. Excellent poetry, my friend.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2017 12:51:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it, Freddie; thank you. Laughter is healthy! Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 2/14/2017 9:52:00 AM

Great haiku Paul...well done..

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2017 12:43:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/13/2017 6:07:00 PM

Beautifully done, Paul. Good luck in the contest - and a very happy birthday.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2017 12:43:00 PM

Thank you, Agnes, Both comments and wishes are appreciated. Regards // paul

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/13/2017 3:29:00 AM

This is so cute... Beautiful haiku...Enjoyed it... A 7...

Paul Callus
Date: 2/13/2017 11:06:00 AM

I am pleased you like it, Supraja; thank you. Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/12/2017 2:41:00 PM

I could feel the magic of autumn's breeze moving through the wind chimes. A beautiful poem, Paul. I see from comments below that you have a birthday coming. Hope it's a happy one.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/13/2017 10:53:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely comments, Carolyn...and for the birthday wishes:) Warm regards // paul

Chris Hagy

Date: 2/11/2017 1:14:00 PM

I heard the moment just reading this...beautiful write Paul:)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2017 3:52:00 PM

Thank you, Chris. Pleased to see you posting again. Regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/10/2017 10:16:00 PM

A perfect haiku - soooo beautiful in the style of the masters! A-7 for sure! Hugs. Pandita

Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2017 7:06:00 AM

You are too kind, Pandita:) Thank you and hugs to you, too. Warm regards // paul

Pashang Salehi

Date: 2/10/2017 9:04:00 PM

Very cute..

Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2017 7:05:00 AM

Thank you, Pashang. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2017 7:04:00 PM

oh this is so cute!!! I hope I can come up with one as good! By the way, heard your birthday was on the way. HAppy birthday (if it's not here already!)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/11/2017 6:45:00 AM

Undoubtedly you will, Andrea:) Thank you for pressing the 'like' button and for the birthday wishes! You're right; my birthday is waiting just round the corner...:) Regards ~ paul