Hushed

if in darkness i fall silent shadowless in the rise of dawn remember my words as they fell

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/27/2019 5:19:00 AM

A sad beauty Sandy!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/27/2019 6:41:00 AM

Thank you...one never knows when tomorrow will not rise

Ann Foster

Date: 11/24/2019 1:34:00 PM

This was exquisite. Truly lovely. Ann

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/24/2019 1:45:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend :) hugs

Silent One

Date: 11/23/2019 3:46:00 PM

Please don't say that....

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2019 6:48:00 PM

:( ...i'd be lying if i said i wasn't worried...

Silent One

Date: 11/23/2019 8:06:00 AM

the death of a muse.. well not here.. but it could be so.... silence is not always great..

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2019 12:26:00 PM

or the death of me.... i fear the end is near at times... hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/23/2019 7:25:00 AM

I think this is how most poets feel.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2019 12:27:00 PM

thank you Caren... hugs :) i am sure most poets will be remembered through their words...

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/22/2019 2:41:00 PM

Hus hush sweet Sandra...very emotive verse, my friend...the grass is always greener~somewhere lol...ciao bella...^WW^ :o)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/22/2019 4:01:00 PM

In heaven I am sure it would always be green

Chris Green

Date: 11/22/2019 2:30:00 PM

My heart weeps tears through the cracks slowly forming because of your sad and lonely feeling poem my friend.

Chris Green
Date: 11/22/2019 4:18:00 PM

If you feel like you are going to fall, you just lean on me, I am your friend and that is what friends are for.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/22/2019 4:03:00 PM

Your comment would make a nice poem even though poignant ....hugs