Hush of Xmas Past

To rush down the stairs of pure excitement
and spill onto the floor of packaged gifts
Wanting to open each cherished  present
Only to find new clothes, the emotion shifts
To live in worlds of a child's fantasy
as they dream of things that can't be obtained
To grapple with truth, a learned capacity
One a disappointed child can't sustain
This is the past of a hushed Christmas
When spaces lived in were trodden and poor
Where there was comfort in love's surplus
and our lives were before us to explore

To have lived through a time, when love was all
Even if presents of clothes, were all we saw


contest "X" new or old
sponsor Constance La France
12/11/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Peck Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 11:44 AM
Frederic, Congratulations on your win, and also for finding comfort in love when there were only clothes under the tree.
Brown Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 6:29 PM
Congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:24 PM
Frederic, excellent and congratulations on your First Place Win in my "X" (Xmas) New/Old Contest. I think your poem is beautiful and wonderfully penned and I love the music ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Canerdy Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 7:17 PM
CONGRATS on your win, Frederic. Yes, kids--many of them--learn early in life that necessities come first, even at Christmas. Janice
Koplin Avatar
November 28, 2021 at 5:09 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 7:57 AM
Well written sentiments, Frederic, of bittersweet memories. As we grow up, we realize love is the greatest gift in childhood, but every child dreams of a Christmas morning with lots of toys! I predict a big winner with this one! Hugs, Rhonda
Roberts Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:52 PM
loved the way you chose to write this subject . Well done Frederic ...Seren
Guzzi Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Funny you know I was always such a practical girl, the parenting child, I made a lot of my own clothes & that must be why to get new store bought clothes at Xmas was not disappointing (also perhaps girls like clothes more?) My home life was very unsettled and just to all be together at Xmas(without arguments) was fine by me & candy canes! I love peppermint! You wrote a fine sonnet above, you were lucky to be so loved as well! Thanks for the kind comment you left! Happy Holidays
Parker Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 5:01 PM
Merry Christmas Debbie to you and yours
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