Hush

"To the bearer's of my soothing soul" - (By poet) Hush little darlin' do not cry It was just my time to say good-bye We've shared good life so many years Remember our good times and save those tears Save those tears for when you're okay When happiness comes back to you one day I'll pray for you to be happy soon And I'll be watching you from beyond the moon I'll ask the lord to soothe your soul And to brighten up that darkened hole That's been hurting inside your aching chest Since, the day I laid me down to rest Writing Challenge-H-Words Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France 2/27/2023

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/12/2023 5:15:00 AM

Congrats Charlie that is such a touching poem. Truly beautiful.

Constance La France

Date: 3/2/2023 12:43:00 AM

Charlie, excellent writing and very emotional. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, I like your quote also, blessings, Constance

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/1/2023 4:44:00 AM

Oh Charlie, this is sad, and so well expressed from the perspective of the departed. Well done, very creative and deeply etched with emotion. Congrats on your win, :)