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Hurricane Sandy Chaos

Nothing looked the same. We returned home to witness the damage.  Streets once familiar as breathing felt like we were watching tv in slow motion  out the window of the car.   An eerie quiet sits atop the dreams piled high along each sidewalk,  graveyards of cherished memories as far as the eye can see. Friendly but strange national guard check points. A necessary evil yet a stark reminder that evil is not limited to mother nature.  Black the new horizon.  An eerie quiet prevails   There is a slimey cold scum, a second skin on everything.   Drenched personal   possessions, the life wrung out of them  in frigid red, green, and orange rivers running down the driveway. Christmas, Easter Halloween,  newly minted or cherished through generations

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Date: 4/14/2014 5:35:00 AM
Interesting perspective, being able to see the damage through the eyes of the witness and not just tv or newspapers put a real perspective on things, thanks for the experience
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Joe Murphy
Date: 4/14/2014 6:16:00 AM
Txs. This is the 2nd part of a trilogy. Too close to home for fine tuning, hence the choppy imagery/meter.
Date: 4/13/2014 6:57:00 AM
Joe, I remember the devastating image the hurricane left. You expressed the after mood well. SKAT
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Joe Murphy
Date: 4/14/2014 6:14:00 AM
Thank you. I wrote these in the moment. Very raw, uneven, have not been able to refine.

Book: Shattered Sighs