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It’s been so long that we have been together Though many years have passed I’m yours forever I can’t stop thinking `bout the fun we’ve had Our life together is still super rad It’s just a hurricane of love ~Coming our way~ Still a hurricane of love ~Double red flag warning~ Just a hurricane of love ~Blowing us away~ Still a hurricane of love ~Flooding our emotions~ This is the calm before the storm above And we are trapped in an eyewall of love Gusts of desire drive us to our fate It’s way too late now to evacuate It’s just a hurricane of love ~Coming our way~ Still a hurricane of love ~Double red flag warning~ Just a hurricane of love ~Blowing us away~ Still a hurricane of love ~Flooding our emotions~ These Cat 5 feelings we just cannot stop Emotions whirling like a spinning top Your riptide pulls me in so ever deep Storm surge of love so strong it makes me weep It’s just a hurricane of love ~Coming our way~ Still a hurricane of love ~Double red flag warning~ Just a hurricane of love ~Blowing us away~ Still a hurricane of love ~Flooding our emotions~ It’s just a hurricane of love ~Coming our way~ We keep each other wanting more ~Double red flag warning~ Still a hurricane of love ~Blowing us away~ We’re not in Kansas anymore ~Flooding our emotions~ It’s just a hurricane of love ~Storm surge of desire~ Still a hurricane of love ~Rising higher and higher~ Still a hurricane of love… *** October 25, 2019 F T I series 8 passion Brian Strand, sponsor

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Date: 3/4/2019 10:24:00 PM
Love your piem. Very creative Panagiota Romios
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Mark Toney
Date: 3/5/2019 12:02:00 AM
Panagiota, thank you for the nice compliment! I’ve read some of your poems and you’re very creative too. ~Mark
Date: 2/26/2019 12:33:00 PM
Great song Mark I can feel it!
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Mark Toney
Date: 2/26/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, John. I appreciate the encouragement! ~Mark
Date: 2/25/2019 11:11:00 PM
Wow, I'm overwhelmed by your hurricane - great line "way too late to evacuate" - passionate stuff!
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Date: 2/25/2019 11:16:00 PM
Much appreciated, Michelle! ~Mark

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