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Hurricane

The storm spiraled closer. Hysteria blooms. Water, wind, waves, when, where the news - a kaleidoscope of uncertainties, driving chaotic migrations. Perched at ocean’s edge, in perpetual peril, we are awaiting the cacophony of destruction. In the face of the apocalypse, promises ring hollow. 9/10/2017 For contest: 8 word challenge 4 (hysteria, kaleidoscope, perpetual, chaotic, cacophony, apocalypse, spiraled, hollow) Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 9/17/2018 1:18:00 PM
Congrats, Agnes. Well done.
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Date: 9/30/2017 1:26:00 PM
Agnes, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
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Date: 9/29/2017 1:11:00 AM
Congrats, Agnes on your win.
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Date: 9/28/2017 7:17:00 PM
Great write Agnes....it is exactly what happens as a hurricane approaches .Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/28/2017 4:56:00 PM
Wonderful write Agnes, your use of the words in such a concise manner is impressive, worthy of a shared 3rd place, congrats and thanks for entering my contest!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/28/2017 5:16:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement, John; I am glad you liked my poem.
Date: 9/14/2017 8:06:00 PM
Wow, incredible job with those words. Was it not entered in the hurricane contest too? Surely it would have been a top winner!!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/14/2017 9:03:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I did not feel it right to enter the poem written for this one contest into another one running at the same time.
Date: 9/14/2017 8:31:00 AM
A superb write Agnes...best of luck my friend...^WW^
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/14/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thank you, ^WW^
Date: 9/10/2017 7:20:00 PM
An eloquent use of the listed words Agnes. Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/14/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 9/10/2017 4:31:00 PM
This sounds more compelling than my entry. Oh well.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/14/2017 8:36:00 AM
Oh, your entry was lovely, Dale!
Date: 9/10/2017 4:08:00 PM
You chose a scene that everyone is watching for your lovely poem Agnes..well done with the 8 words..my very best for a win!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/14/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay.
Date: 9/10/2017 4:01:00 PM
Powerfully penned Agnes the waiting and watching must be terrifying for people. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 9/14/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. Yes, I cannot imagine - we are safely in the Midwest, far away from the ocean.

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