Hurricane

Must confess I would not have liked to have
gone through life without experiencing a hurricane 
And when Dean came I rode it out with a bit of excitement
as the winds bellowed, the roof creaked with every thrust
And I witnessing the force of nature. 
When it had finished raging
The strong was separated from the weak
as if nature had designed a scalpel
to remove the dead tissues opening an area of growth and renewal
to once again invigorate ,renew and redress 
what was meant to be done,but in a bludgeoning fashion.
I then took stock, and things that had once stood proud 
was shamefully, head bowed, chastened, 
suffering in pain 
but to start the renewal 
and as time permit, the slow rebirth
then the flourish followed by its bloom 
and soon I wonder,when will it come again?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 24, 2012 at 9:06 PM
Robert, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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December 26, 2012 at 2:53 AM
Thanks PD,hope you had a wonderful Christmas and a fulfilling New Year. Your contributions in all its forms are well appreciated.
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December 17, 2012 at 10:01 AM
Excellent write! Could feel the emotions
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December 17, 2012 at 10:44 AM
Thanks Susan, was on a wing and a prayer, bumpy ride.
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December 16, 2012 at 9:04 AM
Having been through one I can totally understand this , a good write my friend, xx
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December 16, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Thanks Mandy, your opinion is valued.xxx
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