Hurricane

Weary from her charm and words. Her soft voice that soothes and warns, of the slowly conjuring storm. Irresistible at first glance, Electrifying pulses, youthful romance, Head over heels. I don't stand a chance. Translating to a passion. Evolved into an obsession. Now vulnerable, comes utter self destruction. Don't tremble my dear, don't look away. Just hide with me here, for my hearts sake. Call her the hurricane, the one to blame. She came, she conquered, and never goes away.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/22/2010 7:45:00 AM

this is a beautiful poem filled with lots of great imagery i loved the first two stanzas especially and that 3rd stanza i think speaks of infatuation more than anything, this was a great write and i really enjoyed the emotion!=)Jo

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/22/2010 5:45:00 AM

This seems like a relationship of a young lady with an older guy..with a whirlwinding hurricaine:)..Let the heart do the workout:)Did i get it,?,Charma

Allie Lusha

Date: 2/22/2010 2:24:00 AM

Love poems that you have to read a couple of times to discover whats going on, we all interpret things differently and each time I read it becomes clearer and the feelings become apparent as the story unfolds......Allie

Catherine Marggraf

Date: 2/21/2010 10:14:00 PM

very good

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2010 9:34:00 PM

Phillip, I really like this one. I only have a small confusion. Is this another woman coming between you and a current woman? I ask this because in the last stanza you are asking someone not to tremble and to hide with you as if hiding from the OTHER one that is the hurricane coming to destroy. Did I get that right? I hope you will post more for me to respond to. Luv, Andrea