Hurdles

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Freshly mowed grass touched by silver dew Golden sunshine sparkles Wispy clouds revealed hugging skies blue Morn unaware of hurdles Sunrise knew not of a rainy day Nor of a rainy night Nor of a cold, sunless morn Where there was no sunlight Nor of a northwest chilly breeze That chilled the birds so fair Nor of the poet out on the porch Shivering in the chair

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2018 12:45:00 PM

- Described so beautifully by the poet ...a little cold early morning ... but the sun will give warmth, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/6/2018 2:56:00 PM

SS, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent here reading and taking time to comment. Your comments are encouraging . Sara

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 4/27/2018 6:53:00 AM

Delightful, Sara, as I sit at my computer looking out at the "first two lines". I walk a lot and those chilly days, it is the same challenge, I come back in to get a heavier coat and scarf. Great piece.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/27/2018 9:42:00 AM

Reason, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate you stopping by. Your comments are encouraging. It was chilly out this morn early so here one would have needed a heavy wrap to start the day but it is suppose to get close to seventy later. Sara