Hungry Birds

hungry birds feeders filled to over-flow bullies push and shove For Charles' haiku contest

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/20/2011 6:20:00 AM

Great Haiku with nice imagery, Joyce! And best of luck in Charles' contest!...Love, Gert

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/20/2011 3:22:00 AM

Joyce, this is wonderful. I wrote one recently on the same subject. The bigger birds are real bullies. This is my haiku just for you:)) melting morning wagtails protest from above as crows swoop to feast

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/18/2011 7:21:00 AM

Wonderful haiku with equally nice images, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/18/2011 5:04:00 AM

Wow Joyce. The visual image is super. All the best.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/18/2011 2:25:00 AM

how descriptive this is, joyce! go for the win in charles' contest! great stuff!! :) huggs,nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2011 6:49:00 PM

Great entry Joyce .. good luck as this is a great visual piece .. exactly the theme for the contest.. my entry just posted is .. thunder trembles...my friend... good luc again with luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2011 6:30:00 PM

bad birdies.. enjoyed your haiku,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/17/2011 5:35:00 PM

I didn't know John had posted a haiku contest, but I have seen the blue jays scare off the other birds at the feeders and birdbaths. They can be quite violent sometimes, eh? Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/17/2011 5:35:00 PM

Indeed they do push and shove...fun to watch them!!