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Hunger- Pleiades Contest

Hunger have a notion you might hallucinate, we are holding bodies so close, hurting me, when you squeezed hand tightly, emotions, have shown us we are one, hungering for our love. written in Pleiades Form penned 20/2/2017

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/24/2017 2:31:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Seren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2017 2:35:00 AM

Hello Anne-Lise thanks for stopping by ...Seren

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/24/2017 1:07:00 AM

Love the passionate take on hunger...great write! Congrats to you, Seren! Hugs, Rhonda

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2017 2:36:00 AM

Hello Rhonda nice to see you these days....Seren

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2017 11:46:00 PM

Very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2017 7:58:00 PM

REally like yours, Seren. Congrats on the win.

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2017 2:33:00 AM

Hi Andrea ... thanks...Seren

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/23/2017 6:29:00 PM

Creative way to depict hunger. Steamy! Great work, Seren. Congrats on your win! Blessings

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/24/2017 2:33:00 AM

thanks Kim....Seren

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/20/2017 9:55:00 PM

Seren, that one melted me, you really, you really, well ...................

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2017 11:14:00 PM

ok ok you can have another rum and coke ....Seren

Tim Smith

Date: 2/20/2017 6:07:00 PM

I'm hungering for some chips...awesome Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2017 11:13:00 PM

Oh my you lead a sheltered life Tim haha....Seren

James Inman

Date: 2/20/2017 5:48:00 PM

Seren, a sweet write. Don't squeeze too tightly.

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2017 11:15:00 PM

lol is sweet the right word......thx James for commenting.....Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 2/20/2017 4:55:00 PM

Hope that hunger is soon satisfied ... love the take on the H theme good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2017 11:16:00 PM

lol Jan meanwhile will join Tim help him to eat his chips....Seren