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Humpty Dumpty's Poor Judgement

The press was driving Humpty Dumpty mad, thinking about the bad fake news. He'd debated whether to venture into the press room and finally decided, to walk through the enchanted garden. Looking upwards taking his steps for granted, he fell, whirling, falling, falling down a rabbit hole. With his magic ability to shift, Humpty Dumpty hid in the shadows veiling himself. His lodestone attraction to snooping got him caught on a spider's web. A troop of fire ants came marching in with pikes in hands. He twisted, wiggled, and squirmed. What a mess he'd gotten himself into. A woman pushed her way through the throng of fire ants trying to get to the victim stuck in the web. Humpty Dumpty found her exquisite, having long waves of dark ebony hair that fell around her shoulders and down her back. She was clad in all black from her high heels to her sheer blouse that molded her breast. Humpty Dumpty knew he was doomed, even his magic couldn't get him out of this. The queen gave the order to her children to aim and throw their pikes. Poor Humpty Dumpty was dinner! 6/29/2018
Poetry Contest: The mystery of Humpty Dumpty Sponsored By: Faraz Ajmal
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Mcguire Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 9:45 PM
Great! Congrats......
Talbot Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:22 AM
Aw, poor Humpty, loved it, clever ending, congratulation on sharing the number 1 spot, Mick
May Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:14 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats..
Smith Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 2:15 AM
Excellent Eve, congrats :)
Wade Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 7:19 AM
Amazing piece and worthy winner. Congrats. Faux
Gentry Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Awww Congratulations on your #1 win. Fantastic imagination. Of course your writing is brilliant!
Canerdy Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:35 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Eve! Janice
Dutta Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Congrats Eve to win. I am always impressed by your composition. Love
Y. Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 9:42 AM
Lol! Eve, This is such a clever and creative write. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. It was well deserved:-)Alexis
Ajmal Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:01 AM
A excellent poem with deep imaginations, it sure was a joy to read, many congratulations on your 1st position in the contest
Chakrabarty Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Ha Humpty Dumpty's misadventure.I think they were sitting on wall to be taken home as a scrumptious meal. Hugs>rajat
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 8:04 PM
oh my goodness. What an imagination you have. I have read so many of these now, I can hardly know how I will ever think up a NEW reason for his demise of my own. haha. Luck in the contest, but you should not need it!!
Berggren Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 2:41 PM
What great imagination! Hope you win the contest.
Allison Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Fabulous take On the theme:-) Hugs Jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 11:45 AM
This poem's whirlwind of energy is amazing!
May Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 11:32 AM
A great story Eve..Gl in the contest
Gupta Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Superb story in a nicely penned poem, Eve ... Best wishes ...
May Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 2:51 AM
Very nicely penned Eve..best wishes
Man Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Eve, this is one of the better works I've read for the HD Contrst.. best wishes in the coming contest!
Nance Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 6:53 PM
He is going to be a hard boiled egg, poor humpty dumpty. A great take on the theme, what a way to rewrite history ;)
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