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Humpty Dumpty's Poor Judgement

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The press was driving Humpty Dumpty mad, thinking about the bad fake news. He'd debated whether to venture into the press room and finally decided, to walk through the enchanted garden. Looking upwards taking his steps for granted, he fell, whirling, falling, falling down a rabbit hole. With his magic ability to shift, Humpty Dumpty hid in the shadows veiling himself. His lodestone attraction to snooping got him caught on a spider's web. A troop of fire ants came marching in with pikes in hands. He twisted, wiggled, and squirmed. What a mess he'd gotten himself into. A woman pushed her way through the throng of fire ants trying to get to the victim stuck in the web. Humpty Dumpty found her exquisite, having long waves of dark ebony hair that fell around her shoulders and down her back. She was clad in all black from her high heels to her sheer blouse that molded her breast. Humpty Dumpty knew he was doomed, even his magic couldn't get him out of this. The queen gave the order to her children to aim and throw their pikes. Poor Humpty Dumpty was dinner! 6/29/2018
Poetry Contest: The mystery of Humpty Dumpty Sponsored By: Faraz Ajmal

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Date: 7/9/2018 9:45:00 PM
Great! Congrats......
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:22:00 AM
Aw, poor Humpty, loved it, clever ending, congratulation on sharing the number 1 spot, Mick
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:14:00 AM
Dropping back with my Congrats..
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Date: 7/9/2018 2:15:00 AM
Excellent Eve, congrats :)
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:19:00 AM
Amazing piece and worthy winner. Congrats. Faux
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Date: 7/7/2018 10:33:00 PM
Awww Congratulations on your #1 win. Fantastic imagination. Of course your writing is brilliant!
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Date: 7/7/2018 8:35:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Eve! Janice
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Date: 7/7/2018 10:48:00 AM
Congrats Eve to win. I am always impressed by your composition. Love
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Date: 7/7/2018 9:42:00 AM
Lol! Eve, This is such a clever and creative write. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. It was well deserved:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/7/2018 8:01:00 AM
A excellent poem with deep imaginations, it sure was a joy to read, many congratulations on your 1st position in the contest
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Date: 7/2/2018 8:57:00 AM
Ha Humpty Dumpty's misadventure.I think they were sitting on wall to be taken home as a scrumptious meal. Hugs>rajat
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Date: 6/30/2018 8:04:00 PM
oh my goodness. What an imagination you have. I have read so many of these now, I can hardly know how I will ever think up a NEW reason for his demise of my own. haha. Luck in the contest, but you should not need it!!
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Date: 6/30/2018 2:41:00 PM
What great imagination! Hope you win the contest.
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Date: 6/30/2018 11:59:00 AM
Fabulous take On the theme:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2018 11:45:00 AM
This poem's whirlwind of energy is amazing!
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Date: 6/30/2018 11:32:00 AM
A great story Eve..Gl in the contest
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Date: 6/30/2018 10:46:00 AM
Superb story in a nicely penned poem, Eve ... Best wishes ...
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Date: 6/30/2018 2:51:00 AM
Very nicely penned Eve..best wishes
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Date: 6/29/2018 8:05:00 PM
Eve, this is one of the better works I've read for the HD Contrst.. best wishes in the coming contest!
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Date: 6/29/2018 6:53:00 PM
He is going to be a hard boiled egg, poor humpty dumpty. A great take on the theme, what a way to rewrite history ;)
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