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hummingbird oasis

firey spirit rainbow colored wings floating bird bath water cool

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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/10/2025 7:09:00 PM
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Cool as those rainbow wings :)
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/10/2025 7:38:00 PM
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Hugs :0)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/10/2025 12:54:00 PM
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A pretty picture. If for a contest, make sure the last line has one less syllable than it has right now.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/10/2025 3:35:00 PM
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Nice!
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/10/2025 1:32:00 PM
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Not for contest but will correct thanks sweetie!
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 6/10/2025 11:00:00 AM
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Dear Karen, your hummingbird oasis is a burst of color and soul just like fire and rainbow, floating above cool water. Oh, how even the smallest things such as wings on the breeze, a sip from the birdbath can spark joy and wonder turning ordinary days into something magical. Blessings, My Dear Karen, Daniel
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/10/2025 11:18:00 AM
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You’re so right! Have a blessed day as well Daniel!
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Joseph May
Date: 6/10/2025 4:05:00 AM
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Nice imagery Karen, best wishers
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/10/2025 5:51:00 AM
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Thanks Joseph!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/10/2025 1:50:00 AM
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That’s lovely Karen, birds love a bath, to have a splash… Beryl
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/10/2025 5:51:00 AM
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Yes they do! :0)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/9/2025 11:45:00 PM
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'Cool,' the last word in the poem, works in a few different ways for me. Love it when that happens. Thanks, Karen!
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/10/2025 12:33:00 AM
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Aw thank YOU Gershon for reading!

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