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Hummingbird

Flash Flirt Hover Wee jewel Beating wings a blur Life lived at a furious pace

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/3/2009 4:18:00 PM

Barbara, This is a great little poem. Congratulatins on your placement in Brian's contest. Lovingly, Dane

Date: 6/2/2009 1:18:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliterations for a creative poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest! Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Sue Mason

Date: 6/2/2009 1:06:00 PM

Wonderful write here, Barbara ... love the "wee jewel" ... smile ... Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest!

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/2/2009 10:34:00 AM

So beautiful Barbara - warmest congrats on your well deserved win! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/2/2009 6:47:00 AM

A wonderful poem, Barbara....Congratulations on your placing in Brian's contest !! Great job!

Brian Strand

Date: 6/2/2009 6:29:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest BG.Rgds Brian.My latest contest Indelible Impressions is now open

Matthew Brackley

Date: 5/21/2009 8:53:00 PM

ah hummingbird..... please see mine...it is the same.... nice write.matt

John Rhinem

Date: 5/19/2009 5:52:00 PM

Smile~Well, living in the city can sometimes be like that can it not!? But, Hummingbirds are beautiful aren't they~Just like this poem here dear lady!!!:):)~And, "Thank You" for stopping by today~Smile~"It Was Nice To Hear From 'You' Barbara~So, "You Have A Beautiful Evening~May It Be Filled With Beauty & Joy, Always, John!!!"~Wonderful Poem!!!:):) Bye ~

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/19/2009 7:02:00 AM

Oh, I do believe you have captured this enchanting creature to perfection. I see winner all over this one. Absolutely wonderful! Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 5/18/2009 11:47:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest BG Rgds Brian

Cecil Hickman

Date: 5/18/2009 9:46:00 PM

a very well written Fibonacci if this is for the contest good luck you have expressed its style wonderfully,,and Thank you for your very kind words upon my writing and especially for reading,,blessings..Cecil

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/18/2009 6:16:00 PM

One of my favorite of God's many beautiful creatures. A beautiful write and a perfect picture. Smiles from Lolita

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/18/2009 5:04:00 PM

Fast and furious are these wonders of nature, Barbara. Great description of the hummingbird! Love, Carolyn