Hummingbird

I imagine it was once slow and grey
then color came to a lackluster world,
tinted throats drank sunlight
through bowls of honey and light.
Eons shed a useless weight,
until a flint of flight hummed bright,
on shimmering winds.

This morning, one comes to my decking,
an iridescence, its long thin beak held high
as it hovers beside a red and yellow feeder.

It casts a shadow on the wooden floor,
a silhouette much larger than itself.
If I look only at the shadow
it could be some fanciful auk
descending out of a lost world,
but no, it is only a hummingbird,
a speck of color
blown from a windmill of creation
like the rest of us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Achara Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 3:37 PM
Nice! I love humming birds and I love this poem!
Ashford Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 7:21 AM
Thank you Chtta. Obliged to you for the commnts.
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 1:49 PM
what lovely imagery, I've only seen them in photographs would love to see one for real, i especially love' a speck of color blown from a windmill of creation, its truly beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx
Ashford Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 7:22 AM
Thank you Jan, it's good to receive such positive feedback.
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