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What Doesn'T Kill You Makes You Stronger

I never saw it coming I would have done anything for you You blindsided me Hurt and violated me Stripped me of my dignity I trusted you AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on February 10, 2019 for contest CAPTURE THAT EMOTION sponsored by NINA PARMENTER

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Date: 2/10/2019 3:21:00 PM
Like the song says, "you don't know what you got till it's gone" this poem says a lot
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Date: 2/10/2019 4:40:00 PM
Betrayals come in many forms and from people you would never expect. Life throws hard curve balls.
Date: 2/10/2019 11:43:00 AM
Line, you have captured the emotion, and it sounds fresh.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2019 12:27:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 2/10/2019 11:18:00 AM
Sounds like betrayal! Nice emotive write, Line!
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Date: 2/10/2019 12:27:00 PM
Yes absolutely, Kim. They certainly are related. Here's how I see the difference, in this case anyway, betrayal is the 1-on-1 feeling and humiliation includes the impact with respect to everyone in one's environment.

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