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Even so young, life is so precious 
Of human nature there is but one thing on her mind 
As the two year old sits on a puddled pavement...
Her tears withheld, from a saturated and stinky diaper 
She is not frightened of the dangers that loom ahead
Thunder, lightning, fast rising floods that can swallow her whole 
Fallen trees, debris flying here, there, and everywhere 
Her only concern...is to save the worm
 
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4-15-2019

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Date: 5/10/2019 1:35:00 PM
Hello charles Messina, she wants to save the worm because it it tiny. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/6/2019 9:04:00 PM
This is a very heart-warming poem! I love the guise of every child, they're so adorable!
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Date: 5/3/2019 7:19:00 PM
Innocent wonder, everything and anything, a new adventure. If we only could be innocent again. This is such a meaningful verse. It sure evokes memories of life, way back when.
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Date: 4/19/2019 10:34:00 PM
This is so sweet...and wise. It's a good thing babies don't have to worry about the future...that's our job.
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Date: 4/18/2019 6:20:00 PM
G'day Charles … they say every river begins with a rain drop. I'd like to think this child is a breath of fresh air in this troubled world of rear and hate - thank you Charles - Lindsay
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Date: 4/18/2019 3:30:00 PM
Cute, so like a little kid.
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Date: 4/17/2019 5:28:00 PM
Love the immensity of the depth you took in this fine poem. The childlike innocent that reveals the bliss of one unaware of the darkness this world always holds. ' A fav..
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Date: 4/17/2019 5:19:00 PM
And to get a change of diapers ASAP
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Date: 4/17/2019 9:53:00 AM
Charlie, Wow and wow, I love where you took this theme, excellent emotion and I find it very emotional, a FAV for me !
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Date: 4/15/2019 6:13:00 PM
Adorable...Save that worm!
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