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Human Zoo

Human Zoo There was a world where trouble was looming, Where all God's creatures were positively fuming, Until the day had arrived, For the animals to decide, A zoo, where the animals are feeding the humans.

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/24/2024 10:29:00 PM

Could happen one day, who knows. A thought provoking Limerick Daniel, an interesting enjoyable read… Beryl

Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/25/2024 11:02:00 PM

Good Morning Beryl, thank you so much for your kind words, and I'm pleased you enjoyed my first attempt at a Limerick, many thanks, Daniel

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/24/2024 4:54:00 PM

Outstanding, mind bending Limerick, Daniel. Reminded me a bit of "Planet of the Apes" when the Apes were suddenly in charge of humans. With all the trouble we humans are creating, the animals are surely fed up with us :-) I appreciate your creativity with this one. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/25/2024 11:00:00 PM

Hi Sara , who's to say we are not already in a zoo , life's zoo on earth for humans, first attempt at a Limerick , so I thank you for your lovely comments as always . Daniel

Tom Woody

Date: 3/24/2024 6:04:00 AM

Cute lim. Reminds me of a Twilight Zone episode where an alien race has a human in a zoo-like house. Have an awesome Sunday Daniel

Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/25/2024 10:58:00 PM

Hi Tom , it's actually the first Limerick I've ever written , in someways I always earth as a type of zoo for humans and greater forces are pulling the strings . Have a great week Tom . Daniel