Human Son of Peace

In peace he left his lodge, and reverently he trod,

the way his mother shown the way from youth he'd known.

To connect with all there was, as his family slept he played.

he played to the  great white spirit God, with thanks in the

melody, from memory's shared of successfull hunting days,

he thought of his child at play,and his wife with her sun toned

skin, of beads here, she'd braided for him. He thought of tommorow's

trail the inevitable (moving day) on the rolling prairie hills, and

the coming winter ( still )  of the laughter and horseplay there would

be along the way, sending out the breath that the spirit gave back

in his wafting praise. He remembered the forward scouts out under

the open skies, and the owl of the grasslands cry, he asked that the

way be free of eyes of enemies. Human Son of peace, at peace in

the forests half sleep.

for Constance La France's His story contest, written by Joe Maverick.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Austin Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Seems a good seasonal poem, Joe. I like the rustic tone, simplicity. The simple manger comes to mind with the animals, the straw, the warmth in spite of the cold. Love, daver
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 10:31 PM
back to this one. One of my faves of your poems, Joe. thanks for your recent comment. Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 26, 2011 at 2:56 PM
an energetic and electrifying write Joe.. much appreciate your warm comments on my poetry luv.. hope u have been well ... we are GREAT..
Johnson Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 2:07 AM
The great spirit looked down, with just the slightest frown, cos the Buffalo were gone gone gone:( Great poetry Joe... on ya Don
Mac Donald Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 6:32 AM
A keen and insightful write, Joe! The aboriginies are oft of the most patient, and wisest souls. You have captured one of these soulful moments. Can be people of legend and mystique. Their tradition and customs are most intriguing. Immensely enjoyed this write! Happy Easter Monday, Joe!!! Best to you, Mikki
Foulk Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 8:00 PM
a very creative piece you wrote here
Mehta Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 1:14 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Constance, Joe
Haick Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in Constance's Contest, Joe. I love this incredible story you've written so well! Always, Annalise
Freeman Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Always a pleasure to see you in the top ten, Joe. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored seventh place. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on your super win Joe in Constance's contest " Tell His Story". Love, Carol
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March 22, 2011 at 9:13 AM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Joe. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 8:53 AM
Great story, Joe. Many congrat's on your WIN. Lainie
Horne Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Great poem - many congrats : ) Jack
Fillmore Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 7:36 AM
Congrats on your top ten finish, Joe, love the story and the name..."Human Son of Peace"...excellent write:) Thanks for your congrats on Kwe'...much appreciated!
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:45 PM
my happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette
Mannan Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 9:03 PM
What a lovely name for this man. Loved the write. Heartiest congratulations for this win.
Johnson Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:34 PM
Captivating story.Congratulations on your top ten win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 8:27 PM
Congrats Joe on your super win in Tell His Story contest luv.. a stunning write .. and beautifully written my friend... enjoy another top ten win with luv..
Culverhouse Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Hey Joe, how are you?? thanks for not letting me give out/up on my writing. I feel like I am in a creative slump and just can't seem to write a decent poem.
Austin Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 1:44 PM
This one has a beautiful rustic tone and scene that, unfortunately, has been lost forever. Like the last two lines, the "forest's half sleep." Love, Dave
Onclaud Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 11:28 AM
just the calming effect i need, joe.. and just as amazing as it can get... a rare write that winning luck to you! :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
March 15, 2011 at 5:43 AM
Intense and dramatic lines Joe.. wonderful depiction of the photo luv which Constacne will luv.. good luck in her contest with this brilliant write and wonderful story line.. expressive imagery exudes from your lilting lines Joe..
La France Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 8:29 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, Joe, I like the way you interpreted the inspiration image~~
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March 13, 2011 at 8:31 PM
Beautiful and uplifting write Joe. Amazing what creation can be made from simply looking at a picture. Great write... Lay
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March 13, 2011 at 2:52 PM
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