Human Noise

I see city dwellers resting on concrete seats
Day dreaming a thought or two
The fragrance of coffee wafting out into the street

Here’s to the situated sparrow poking and jumping about
Searching for his daily opportunity
Honking cars and fuming buses some filled with people, some without
 
All moving quickly with a purpose to somewhere
The city is buzzing about at cool summer 78 degrees
Red lights, green lights an old man afoot singing to himself unaware 

Just think of what he’s seen in a lifetime 
Buildings coming down and sky scrappers going up 
Constant motion and change and crime 

Kids on skateboards with I-pods in their ears 
Dial up phones to cell phones in everyone’s hands
I wondered if he had a humming in his head throughout these years?

Or was he busy in the past reading books he’d already read?
Isn’t interesting all the commotion mankind makes 
While a small bird eats the crumbs from a piece of old bread
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Duhart Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 5:43 AM
Yes our surroundings and distractions are so great but this is what makes for great poetry..catch the moment and write..Awesome job.
Hickman Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 3:48 PM
a beautiful write that captures so many different scenes of life and dedication to daily living. especially the ones so many take for granted and never think about but you delivered within these words,,Blessings..Cecil and Thank you for taking the time to read and comment upon my words..
Mason Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 9:10 AM
Great imagery here, Laura ... you've really captured the city view ... might want to fix the second stanza, line 3 to "honking" i.e. an "n" instead of a "c" ... smile ...
Fraser Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 3:40 PM
Kool poem Laura, i wonder how many individual sounds there are on any given day on the streets>>James
Keen Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 11:42 AM
wow and you say my poem was good, this is amazing
Shahwan Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 7:40 AM
Beautiful poem.
Brown Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 5:24 AM
Spot on my dear friend. Fantastic writing. Did I hear a fly? Love ,Carol
Kisakye Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 4:51 AM
it shows the real situation in cities especially when they are full of people. Really people make noise
Freeman Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 6:59 PM
A good write,Laura about city dwellers and the nature that live there too, God bless Moses
Richards Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 5:59 PM
Love this Laura.....how nature ignores the chaos around it....and carries on! Well done! ~ Carrie
Gorelick Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 3:44 PM
I love it...I often think about what our grandchildren will think about and what noise they will be making. BG
Peranteau Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 12:45 PM
This poetry is fantastic Laura ! I'm a city boy the most of mine life,..and you captured this quite well,.TY for this one !!! james
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