Human Need

Devoid of color As barren as a moonscape A life without love

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Paul Holmes

Date: 7/2/2010 10:15:00 AM

Very well said.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/29/2009 11:42:00 AM

I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Barbara. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Sean Kelly

Date: 12/28/2009 11:06:00 AM

Got it in one , Barbara ( or should that be 5-7-5) . Either way , a perfect Senryu ....

Ronald Bingham

Date: 12/28/2009 10:19:00 AM

Everyone needs a little color in their lives, everyone needs a little love. Well said my friend, May God always Bless and keep. Ron

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2009 10:14:00 AM

On the giving and receiving end makes life dull. Great thoughts that you have penned in this one. Sara