Human Angel


In a ferry,  gloom wore a drained cloth of eve
My heart desolate drifting  far and bleak,
Tears fluid as love’s passage can’t  rewrite 
One lilt of birds through wind’s  maddened thud.

And needing rest on a couch in dull shade,
Irreverent  the moon … how brittle the sheen…
Till  a  peasant lounged beside me , bright as flame
Lightening my face… amber eyes aglow.

His ruffled hair touched my cheeks without words,
O humble silence releasing angst,  my   fear
That he offered soft  tunes from his old wooden harp ;
Then left in haste with a smile like a cherub's  glow.

Somehow, I felt warmth  revived,   thorn’s relief
Freed  by  a young street boy so divinely sent...
A heaven’s keeper  , a human  the least
An angel  on earth, granting crown from grief.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Beaufort Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 11:35 AM
Nette, this describes a wonderful sense of being open to wonders around us. I think there are a lot of people who feel blue who could benefit from this philosophy and experience you describe.
Gasun Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 8:09 PM
Angels are always around us. This is another amazing write from you my dear poet friend, Nette. I immensely enjoyed reading it this morning while having my longer free time at work. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your poetry. hugs
Godwin Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 4:33 PM
Remember me? I missed Soup and many people, including you with the beautiful face. If you wish to know why I was gone, it would be easier if you read, "Soup Disappearance Reason" on my 1st page. Enough of that. Your poem was crafted with your unique talent that impressed me when I read my first one. I wrote about a human angel for the contest, is that what prompted your write? If so, I know it will impress. HUGS... CayCay SO GLAD TO SEE YOU
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