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Human Angel

In a ferry, gloom wore a drained cloth of eve My heart desolate drifting far and bleak, Tears fluid as love’s passage can’t rewrite One lilt of birds through wind’s maddened thud. And needing rest on a couch in dull shade, Irreverent the moon … how brittle the sheen… Till a peasant lounged beside me , bright as flame Lightening my face… amber eyes aglow. His ruffled hair touched my cheeks without words, O humble silence releasing angst, my fear That he offered soft tunes from his old wooden harp ; Then left in haste with a smile like a cherub's glow. Somehow, I felt warmth revived, thorn’s relief Freed by a young street boy so divinely sent... A heaven’s keeper , a human the least An angel on earth, granting crown from grief.

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Date: 3/25/2025 11:35:00 AM
Nette, this describes a wonderful sense of being open to wonders around us. I think there are a lot of people who feel blue who could benefit from this philosophy and experience you describe.
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Date: 3/17/2025 8:09:00 PM
Angels are always around us. This is another amazing write from you my dear poet friend, Nette. I immensely enjoyed reading it this morning while having my longer free time at work. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your poetry. hugs
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Date: 3/15/2025 4:33:00 PM
Remember me? I missed Soup and many people, including you with the beautiful face. If you wish to know why I was gone, it would be easier if you read, "Soup Disappearance Reason" on my 1st page. Enough of that. Your poem was crafted with your unique talent that impressed me when I read my first one. I wrote about a human angel for the contest, is that what prompted your write? If so, I know it will impress. HUGS... CayCay SO GLAD TO SEE YOU
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