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Hugs That We Once Shared

Hugs that we once shared, lasted just a glimpse in time If only I could read her mind, and imagine what I'd find Would I find a woman of truth, or a woman of trust Or a woman with a mind, whose mind has turned to rust To drift into another's world, and promise them the earth Hugs that we once shared, does it really make them worth They only lasted a glimpse of time, happened they never should If I could turn back time, your damn right I would *~* http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-16.php

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/24/2014 5:57:00 AM

when our trust broken and seems things aren't the same anymore we do hope to turn time.. tobturn time is impossible all we can do is to face and have the choice of either to let go or continue pushing.. .

James Fraser
Date: 11/24/2014 10:41:00 AM

Life is lived for a reason, tomorrow is lived for the living, James :)

Bethany St John

Date: 10/28/2012 7:23:00 PM

Beautiful poem James. Lots of emotion here - I feel ya.

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/5/2012 8:24:00 PM

there are two good reasons for turning back time. and you just named one of them.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/1/2012 12:29:00 PM

Ah, the capricious woman seps lively in your poem James. If nothing else, she makes life interesting. Loved the feeling in this! Lizzy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2012 11:22:00 AM

This one made me think..I am wondering of whom he is speaking or if he is just writing?....Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/21/2012 3:00:00 AM

So much depth here,I can read your thought and feel the emotion, when our trust is shattered by those we love most.. We definitely want to change back time.. I do believe there's always a better tomorrow on hold my good friend-Charma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2012 9:59:00 AM

amazing deep feeling..pd

John Rhinem

Date: 3/16/2012 9:15:00 AM

Smile ˜ If I Could Gather The Fruits In Your Blooms Or Would That Be Looms? ˜ Surely, I Also Would Turn Back Time To Gaze Upon Your Lovely Splendours, In Sweeet Fragrance As You Exit The Shower With Your Long Golden Legs, Freshly Shaved ˜ No Need For Towels ¥ My Love, John!:) ˜

John Rhinem

Date: 3/16/2012 9:02:00 AM

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2012 1:37:00 PM

You will find love again James, this is a lovely written poem - alot of hugs Anne-Lise

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/15/2012 12:06:00 PM

beautifully written and touching piece James

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/15/2012 11:00:00 AM

wow, what a thought provoking scene, my king... deep reflections that sway with your lyrical words... amazing!..:) huggs!