Hubris

Certain men have risen to claim dominance over society,
Their actions attest to barren depths of indifference,
Caring not that those who are unable to fight back
Are trodden beneath the heavy boots of oppression;
Artistry, vision unrecognized by these ruthless men
Allowing the best of creation to fall unrealized;
Blindness reflected in the aperture of willfulness,
They fail to realize the key to their survival
Depends upon those they seek to trample.
Denying the nuance of eternal life,
Disbelieving warnings that their war-filled saga
Lacks the grace of God’s perfect blessing,
Their hubris knows no bounds,
Their proclivity for power overriding any doubt.
With no one possessing the temerity to question their authority
They flourish in shallow praise, unable to comprehend
They bring about their own self-inflicted death
As disease eats away the marrow of their existence.
Unmourned, unheeded they shall pass away
Forgotten, unremarkable as they die an ignoble death.












11/19/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:31 AM
Deb, I enjoyed reading and great way of the use of the 8 words , nicely done.. Congratulations on your 1st place win.
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November 28, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Congratulations on your well-earned win with this excellent write, Deb!
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November 28, 2018 at 7:20 AM
Epic piece! Congratulations on your top win Deb, xomo!
Pandit Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 6:55 AM
Back with congrats on your FIRST PLACE win, Deb..well deserved.
Barden Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:05 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Deb - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
Radke Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Thank you, Gregory. It was a challenge and as you say, also quite rewarding to fit this fine set of words into a poem. I find inspiration from contests such as these. Sincere congratulations to you as well. Your poem was beautiful.
Warrior Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 5:30 PM
Congrats! on your win my friend...excellent entry deb...love & light...^WW^
Radke Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Thanks so much for your supportive comment. It means a great deal coming from a poet I much admire.
Watson Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 4:46 PM
This is absolutely wonderful poetry, a strong message, and a seemingly effortless use of the subscribed vocabulary. Congratulations,Deb!
Radke Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Thank you, Wendy. Your comment is very welcome and I appreciate you.
Hamilton Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 4:29 PM
This is excellent Deb, just what I was hoping for, congrats on a fine shared win!
Radke Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:34 AM
Thank you so much, John. I'm very honored to be among the winners in this thought-provoking contest. It was great fun to write for this one. Deb
Pandit Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 6:43 AM
The intensity of your words convey a splendid message..power, arrogance, disregard ..will cause their fall..just as you ending lines suggest. Well done, Deb.
Radke Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Hi, Vijay. Thanks for this comment. You read exactly what I was hoping to say. Vanity comes always before the fall. If history teaches us nothing else, it is this. Deb
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