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How to move forward

The be all and end all So rapid in and out of context Illusion mostly, loitered in Facts change We are not in a whirlpool The end and the beginning Interchangeable often Pins and needles Reminding us to move Yet we just switch our footing I can walk in any direction Choose flight and land Destinations can be haphazard I can map it out, plot Yet I'm unaccustomed to spells But perhaps recipes and scripts Should resume To be conjured into existence Is all anyone ever wants

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/6/2024 4:25:00 PM

Poem sounds like the basics are still a good idea. I liked these thoughts and how they transcend.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/7/2024 1:02:00 PM

Thanks Hilda, appreciated x

Paul Willason

Date: 3/6/2024 3:08:00 PM

An inpired write DD...just an excellent poem weaving observation, wisdom and emotion together in an engaging mix...very much enjoyed diving into this one.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/7/2024 1:01:00 PM

Thank you Paul, delighted to see you stopping by. Thank you for your kind praise x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/6/2024 10:03:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this powerful write. Some move on/some do not. It is up to each person. Have a blessed spring day.........................

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/7/2024 1:00:00 PM

That's true Paula, we need to look up sometimes and decide what we want x

Ink Empress

Date: 3/6/2024 8:13:00 AM

What a profound write this is dear dd, gives a philosophical touch too to your word weaving, and so much truth delivered here. I agree and it resonates with me too: we are after all human and we keep forgetting, that not everything is a whirlpool and we can make a chnge, end and beginning can be interchangeable. How powerful! Pleasure reading your thoughts, well woven and conveyed. Sending you light always

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/7/2024 12:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Ink, we do easily forget that so much can change if we focus on it. Thank you for your kind words x

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/6/2024 6:21:00 AM

Dear DD, Your poem is a captivating exploration of the fluidity of life's journey. It is truly inspiring to see how you navigate shifting contexts and embrace the uncertainty of beginnings and endings. Your poetic words call us to embrace change and forge our own paths. Your poetic talent shines brightly, illuminating the way forward for all who read your work. - Blessings, Daniel

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/6/2024 8:00:00 AM

Ahh you capture the line of enquiry perfectly Daniel - it's fun to internally question these things, we are often not as stuck as we think - just repeating patterns