How Long

this race thing must stop we need a love shop its make me sweat a lot am just a black dot this can't kept going on its so wrong to be abuse and accuse cause of the corlor my skin lord its a sin iwish i was never born lord oh oh oh HOW LONG

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2013 10:55:00 AM

Kurtis, Congratulations, :)on having your poem Featured on the Soups Home Page.... enjoy your coming week. always~ LINDA

J. Dover

Date: 5/17/2012 5:46:00 PM

Interesting poem, Kurtis, I always enjoy reading your pieces because they're a riddle to me, I don't know if you mean it that way, but I like a challenge in analysis ;) Thanks for sharing, deeply felt through the 'light' poetry, Love, J.