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How long have you been Didn’t you look at the Great Bear, Didn’t you look up at Orion And waited for a golden shooting star? For how long, I add, Have you not sought beauty, In Cassiopeia’s black eyes, Weren’t you stung by the white Scorpion? How long have I been saying Have you not sought your soul in heaven, She who rolls like a burning stone, In the constellation of the Dragon? Don’t tell me, I guess, I’m guessing, you forgot that, That you are too tired by time, working, To answer my irrelevant question.

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Date: 11/9/2023 1:21:00 PM
Had to scroll far down to find one I had not read. Nice poem. I rarely look at the sky and admire the stars. But I bet there a lot of star gazers out there
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Date: 5/24/2023 6:33:00 AM
In our hurry we forget to enjoy the beauty around and think of our soul... which are so important to make life cheerful. Great thoughts yaan!
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Date: 3/13/2023 12:57:00 PM
We are born of the universe, part of the stars. Great poem, Yann! Ellen
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Yann Rolland
Date: 3/13/2023 6:25:00 PM
thanks Ellen universe is wonderfu, take care yannl
Date: 3/11/2023 8:12:00 PM
Never too busy to enjoy the many constellations in the heavens, Wonderful write
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Yann Rolland
Date: 3/13/2023 6:24:00 PM
thanks a lot josey, i appreciate yann
Date: 3/7/2023 7:13:00 PM
Wonderful descriptive picture of the Orion in all its glory. It is there for all to appreciate it as you do, Yann. It would be therapeutic to others if they could find the time. Take care, Shirley
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Yann Rolland
Date: 3/13/2023 6:24:00 PM
thanks a lot , Shirley, i totally agree, with all the word therapeutic have a nice day
Date: 2/28/2023 1:02:00 AM
So many beautiful stars out in the universe and some after working so hard don't have the time to look or else not something one would think about. Great verse. Eve
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/28/2023 6:57:00 PM
thanks a lot, sometimes in modern life, we miss time an will, appreciate yann
Date: 2/27/2023 10:23:00 AM
A beautifully mysterious verse, evoking wonder and an appreciation for the stars. :) Evelyn
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/28/2023 6:57:00 PM
Thanks evelyn, nice to appreciate yann
Date: 2/25/2023 4:55:00 AM
She who rolls like a burning stone: beautiful. Enjoyed the emotions implied in the lines.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/25/2023 6:21:00 PM
Thanks a lot Probir, i Very appreciate
Date: 2/24/2023 3:22:00 PM
This one made me think about our ponderings about what others are thinking--and about ourselves. Janice
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/24/2023 7:25:00 PM
Thanks Janice for the very interesting .comment, i didn't think about this angle, i am glad you feel that have a nice day yann
Date: 2/24/2023 3:34:00 AM
So many beautiful stars in the sky so many beautiful poems to read, yours is one, Love the cryptic write inside that splendid light of celestial truth, nice one poet, keep up the great writes, and have a fantastical day :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/24/2023 7:28:00 PM
Thanks Rose, for the délicious comment, you inspire me for future poems, have a nice week end yann
Date: 2/23/2023 11:21:00 PM
A very thought provoking piece, more said than the words on the page. :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 2/24/2023 7:28:00 PM
thanks vaso, have a great day yann

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