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How long do you labor on a poem that refuses to be completed? How long do you let it try your patience? How long do you tolerate its stubbornness? It’s defiance? How long do you let it play the petulant brat and torture your confidence before you start to hurl foul invectives and death threats at it and it begins to sense it may be deleted at the touch of a key unless it begins to loosen and open and you begin to feel a morning’s frustrations turning into hope and resolvement, like a racing horse lagging behind, then, rounding the final stretch, it gives way to a sudden burst of speed crossing the finish line!

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Date: 5/1/2023 2:21:00 PM
ha! i guess you've answered your own question right here in your poem, maurice! i enjoyed...
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 5/2/2023 10:48:00 AM
Most poems I write (if they're short) begin and end with little effort. Others refuse to be completed. When that happens I close them and file them away for another try and day. When I see no hope of resolvement I delete them. / Maurice

Book: Shattered Sighs