How a Blue Rose Came To Be

"I have dipped my pen in the sublime, it is my gift to you . . ."

                                                           

Once upon a time, many years ago,
There was a sweet and lovely -  red, red Irish rose,
That was plucked prematurely, from the garden vine;
A budding beauty, taken in her prime.

She was laid to rest, upon the death, of a lovers dream;
Upon a chest of ebony, where lie, his would-be  Queen; 
Lowered deep into the depths, of the church yard cemetery;
Her scarlet petals, wilting in the summer breeze.

Then the earth begin to fall, like autumn leaves;
Upon  her petals, and the chest of ebony,
From above her tomb, where stood the grieving groom
Weeping , weeping,  like a willow tree.

Then the sky begin  to disappear, amid that mournful cry,
As  tears - from above, fell from that lovers eyes,
And came to rest, like dew drops on that  Irish rose, 
As she disappeared beneath the earth, there in his grief below                                      
     
In time, he laid a stone of ivory - upon her grave;
Etched deeply  - with the promise he had made:
To love his Irish Rose - forever and a day.

The years and all their seasons came and went
And a million lonely tears were cried and spent
Upon her grave where everyday he knelt and prayed
And dreamed of her until his dying day.  

The epigram has long since faded on the ivory stone   
That still stands alone today, upon her grave
Where from the million tears of love he gave
A seemingly impossible - blue, blue rose has grown.

                                  ~~~~~


Author:  Elaine George
For the contest: Writing In The Sublime ~
Awarded: First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Eastman Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 8:49 AM
Very beautiful poem. Touching. Congratulations on your win.
Ali Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 3:14 AM
Truly sublime... loved it thoroughly:)
Horne Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 1:13 PM
I can't believe how many contest results I've missed - many congrats on all your recent wins, Lainie : )
Dufresne Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 5:38 AM
beautiful narrative, Elaine. Congratulations to you !
Devonshire Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 12:01 PM
Wow! What a touching story behind this poem, Lainie. So deserving of a first-place win. My heart went out to the man who grieved the loss of his love and then when the blue rose grows at the end -- amazing! Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Benson Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 4:53 AM
Your poem makes an interesting read, congratulations on your win, George.
Plotczyk Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 3:49 PM
Lovely poem I must say. Congrats on your first place win. Best of wishes
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 10:04 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Writing in the Sublime" contest Lainie. Love, Carol
Falotico Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 5:20 AM
MANY Cograts on your 1st place win!!! Excellent write.....always Michael
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 4:45 AM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Elaine
Onclaud Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 12:12 AM
awesome , elaine.. how tender this is.. my happy cheers to you for the top win which i cherish sharing the spot with you! :) hugggs!
Mannan Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 10:31 PM
Oh my Elaine this is amazing. So sad, and yet so lovely. Hats Off. Many congrats for this win dear.
Macmillan Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 6:36 PM
Elaine, this is just truly lovely and I'm so glad that it won first place. Creative, romantic and nicely honed! Congrats and so looking forward to reading more. Smiles from Cyndi ---ps thank you for your more than kind comments on my own endevours! Happy writing!
La France Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 4:36 PM
Congratulations, Elaine, on a first place win in my contest, I just loved this poem in everyway possible, excellent writing, my dear , it is truly sublime~~
Johnson Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 3:02 PM
Verly beautiful and a worthy first place win. Congratulations Elaine. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Congrats Laine on your splendid first place win with this glorious creative write my friend.. a wow one..luv..
Moore Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 2:41 PM
wow loved it. Definitely deserved the first place. But I'm kinda drawn to romanticism and loss. Great job.
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