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We can't be lazy. We have to clean up after ourselves. No one is going to do it for us unless we pay someone. And I don't have enough money to do that. Here is a salute to all the house keepers out there who pick up after others.  With a full time job plus trying to look after an ailing husband and try to clean my house, walk the dog, run errands, keep track of appointments and drive him to them sometimes I tend to run out of gas and collapse. A big thank you to all my friends on the soup who understand my periodic absences and still remain faithful anyway.

There's more to keeping house, Than washing dishes, sweeping floors. You must wipe away the dirt, From window sills and doors. Picking up and straightening, For certain is a must, But if you want it to be clean, It's wash and scrub and dust. Because you ran the vacuum, You think you've done a chore, But did you wash the window panes? Did you mop the floor? The cupboard doors need wiping down, Else they get greasy, tacky. The hood above the stove as well, The counter tops are nasty. Then there's dusting to be done, And don't forget the bathroom. Tub and toilet, bathroom sink, Deodorize the room. Now if you think your work is done, The bedrooms need a cleaning, So everything smells fresh and clean, As you lay a-dreaming. Tomorrow is another day, Just like the one before. You did all this just yesterday, But it must have grown some more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 10/8/2021 11:40:00 AM
Dear Judy, I am thinking about you today and hoping you are well. You wrote this poem in August, and here it is October. I do pray that your husband will regain his health. You have a lot on your list, that is for certain. God bless you.
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/3/2022 4:58:00 AM
Thank you so much BJ. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/5/2021 12:48:00 PM
A lovely piece penned so well Judy, feel for you on these chores that never end indeed. Hope things are good with you, just back from a week in the English lake district where the sun shines most of the time. Blessings and hugs,Gordon
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/6/2021 11:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Gordon. Hope you enjoyed the warm sunshine. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/4/2021 8:17:00 AM
LOL, had a chuckle at this
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/6/2021 11:21:00 PM
Thanks bunches Jack. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/3/2021 8:54:00 PM
WoW! Judy, I agree; there's more to housework than doing a surface-level job. Well done. Have a great evening and weekend- Alexis
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/6/2021 11:21:00 PM
Thanks bunches Alexis. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/3/2021 6:34:00 PM
Hello Judy ... a thankless task that never seems to be recognized as hard and constant work. Nicely written and rhymed Judy - Lindsay
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/6/2021 11:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Lindsay. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/2/2021 6:44:00 AM
I understand what you say dear Judy... our household chores just never end... specially the cleaning part... God bless you and may you get enough rest... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/6/2021 10:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Anitha. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/2/2021 2:40:00 AM
I feel for you. I used to keep my house so much better but I found out we can live even though it doesn't get done like it once did. I have been sick now 23 days and some of those days it was all I could do just to make it to the bathroom so I wouldn't make things worse. Somehow we made it through. God looks after us when we are not able to do it ourselves. We just had out 59 wedding anniversary. I called the Chinese restaurant and our grandson picked it up. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/7/2021 2:47:00 AM
Thank you for the prayers. Sara..Even though you are struggling with all the responsibilities you are a prayer warrior. We need more prayer warriors in this world of problems and evil. Sara
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/6/2021 10:25:00 PM
WoW! Happy Anniversary! Hope you are well soon. I will say a prayer for you. I already said one for you but will pray again and again for your well being. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/1/2021 7:32:00 PM
Judy, my heart breaks to read what you've written. Somehow, there must be a 'way out' of the treadmill you find yourself on this year. I pray that the Good Lord interferes asap to give you the respite you crave, and a renewal of strength! G-d bless you, sweetheart. ~ Gershon
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/6/2021 10:08:00 PM
Thanks bunches Gershon. The devil don't bother nobody that's done lost it. This just means I keep good company by walking with The Lord. He protects me and gives me strength. Remember Job and I don't think I'm near as good as he was. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/1/2021 7:02:00 PM
That dust just keeps growing and with harvest time a lot of dust in the air. Cleaning is a non ending job for sure. God bless and get some rest. love phyl
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/6/2021 3:24:00 PM
Thanks bunches Phyl. God Bless, JB
Date: 9/1/2021 11:37:00 AM
I have such a hard time keeping up with housework and don't have the money to pay it done. I'm very glad I live in a small house so it isn't like cleaning constantly! Love your poem. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/1/2021 2:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Gina. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/31/2021 3:22:00 PM
Its never ending in the house, sometimes your better off retiring with a good book quiet as a mouse, lol, nicely written piece dear Judy :)
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/1/2021 2:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Mystic Rose. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/31/2021 1:37:00 PM
you are MUCH better than I am. My hubbie is not ailing, yet he leaves me for all to do even though I work too (he does work more hours though). You would get along really well with my mom. She is REALLY spic and span. I , sadly, will never be like that. It's just to much to ask of me. So my hubbie will just have to tolerate the "not so clean underbelly" of our house. GOOD poem.
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/31/2021 3:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/31/2021 11:56:00 AM
It's nice to enjoy one's home at its best, once the housework is done. It's hard work, but necessary work. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn :)
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/1/2021 2:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Evelyn. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/31/2021 11:55:00 AM
My wife kept an immaculate house, but now she is gone it is literally, "dust to dust" . . . .
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/1/2021 2:34:00 PM
Thank you so much Rico. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/31/2021 10:15:00 AM
There is a sweet satisfaction to keeping one’s house! God bless you Judy!
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Judy Ball
Date: 9/1/2021 2:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim. God Bless, JB
Date: 8/31/2021 6:20:00 AM
Ah! The never ending chores to do, great rhyming, Judy:) will remember you in my prayers:)
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Date: 8/30/2021 10:58:00 PM
Can't be bothered much. I hate house work. The bare minimum. Hugs
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Judy Ball
Date: 8/31/2021 2:53:00 AM
My husband too. He couldn't put anything back where he got it if his life depended on it. Then when I need something it's a scavenger hunt to find it. lol He thinks if you sweep the floor and put the dishes in the dishwasher you've cleaned the house.;) Thanks bunches Victor. God Bless, JB

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