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I reliably detect it in lush colors Instigations from a distinct era this sidereal day, the oscine didn't sing conceivably it is squandered In the cognitive hourglass I scavenge for unmistakable echoes We jumped off the rainbow Dark stains hide beneath my lids they stepped on pure inner bliss a single dormant desire dazzled an emotional need whirling in a whirlwind pearly flawless passion the finest word of life: I love
Written: April 5th, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 4/9/2022 10:53:00 AM
Hi Lasaad, a very soulful write, passionate and emotional. All the best in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/9/2022 4:58:00 AM
Exquisite Free Verse poetry, Lasaad. The rhythm of the words flowed smoothly as I read. I enjoyed your entry for this contest, good luck! Bill
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Date: 4/6/2022 1:58:00 PM
Sotto, I enjoyed your poem. The last line is my favorite. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 4/6/2022 1:49:00 AM
Great ending. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/5/2022 8:36:00 PM
This is poetry of the first rate ! All the Best in the contest dear friend !
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Date: 4/5/2022 3:39:00 PM
Blissful hues you convey Lasaad--I like your ending line.
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