Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

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Hourglass of Affection

I reliably detect it in lush colors
Instigations from a distinct era
this sidereal day, the oscine didn't sing

conceivably it is squandered
In the cognitive hourglass

I scavenge for unmistakable echoes

We jumped off the rainbow
Dark stains hide beneath my lids

they stepped
on pure inner bliss

a single dormant desire dazzled
an emotional need whirling in a whirlwind
pearly flawless passion

the finest word of life: I love

Written: April 5th, 2022

A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Jennifer Proxenos April 9, 2022 at 10:53 AM Hi Lasaad, a very soulful write, passionate and emotional. All the best in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Bill Baker April 9, 2022 at 4:58 AM Exquisite Free Verse poetry, Lasaad. The rhythm of the words flowed smoothly as I read. I enjoyed your entry for this contest, good luck! Bill

Debra L Brown April 6, 2022 at 1:58 PM Sotto, I enjoyed your poem. The last line is my favorite. Blessings ~ Debra

Victor Buhagiar April 6, 2022 at 1:49 AM Great ending. Best for a win.

Valsa George April 5, 2022 at 8:36 PM This is poetry of the first rate ! All the Best in the contest dear friend !

Vijay Pandit April 5, 2022 at 3:39 PM Blissful hues you convey Lasaad--I like your ending line.