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Hot Summer Day

The city workers had torn up the street, but now were gone the weekend had arrived. Still no break though from the sweltering heat as walkers on the boulevard still thrived. A sudden cloudburst dropped a foot of rain it seemed, at least enough to fill the trench before it left. The water didn't drain and soon the children raced into the drench. Tank suits came from nowhere to the street as children leapt into the cooling wet. The grown ups smiled and laughed most indiscreet and stood as far away as they could get from splashing waves that flew over the sides as boys kicked up the water and girls screamed. Still no Coney Island with all the rides, we boys jumped in and in the chaos beamed for we had never had a swimming pool; such wonders did escape those of our class. But now the sky had opened for us fools; we barely noticed water warm and passed the afternoon as though a miracle had come to us. Throughout the closing day we came to love the freedom lyrical that God bestowed upon us just to say we were his children, though too young to know that blessings soon will pass. In fact, the street would be repaired before the falling snow in the next week. We would return to heat for several weeks. Now I don't recall what happened in the coming, cooling clime. I just put hands on the thrill of it all with photos of that once upon a time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/2/2017 12:11:00 PM
Very nicely penned...GL in the contest
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Date: 8/29/2017 8:00:00 AM
Such a great description of a child's experience in that photo, Dale:) I was wondering about the water on the road, and you have made it easier to understand:)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/29/2017 8:59:00 AM
Thanks, Jo.
Date: 8/28/2017 1:02:00 PM
Nice piece. I have special admiration to those who write long poems. Wish you best for contest
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/28/2017 2:06:00 PM
Thanks, Anisha.
Date: 8/26/2017 10:24:00 PM
Oh I hope this is true Dale! What a great memory. A classic heirloom for your grandkids and beyond. So well done. GL with the contest.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 8/27/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thanks, Dean. I wrote it in response to the photo in the contest.
Date: 8/25/2017 11:31:00 PM
Awesome write Dale. It makes Eve's picture come to life with beautiful rhythm and rhyme. I truly enjoyed!
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Date: 8/25/2017 8:41:00 PM
This captures the scene very well.. like the touch about the kids not having a swimming pool.. good for the contest!
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