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You may be getting on in years but several times a day I reach out to caress you of course, I know all the right buttons to press to get you going As the temperature rises you start to get so steamy When you reach boiling point I hear you whistle, Gee, I can’t wait to get my hands on you I rush over to grab you Oh man, you are so darn hot as I lift you up hot fluid comes gushing out Even after all these years you’re still the one to quench my desires - how I love my old kettle! Metaphor of Love Poetry Contest Sponsored by Bobby May 11/12/19

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Date: 11/15/2019 12:33:00 PM
Hi Jan, this reminds me of Lindsay Lauries poem, a twist in the last line - a very clever witty poem and I am sure best for a win. Such passionate words of love - all for your kettle - had a good laugh. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/14/2019 9:16:00 AM
Good one Jan, fun pen indeed! is the kettle still fully steamed!?
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Date: 11/13/2019 6:32:00 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Jan.
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Date: 11/13/2019 4:56:00 AM
- No surprise, Jan :) - Congratulations on your 1st place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/13/2019 12:36:00 AM
Personification at best.. Congrats..
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Date: 11/12/2019 7:53:00 PM
Back with a big congratulations on your 1st place win,,, hugs
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Date: 11/12/2019 7:13:00 PM
clever penning....great win, congrats :)
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Date: 11/12/2019 7:10:00 PM
Mind the censor, Jan!
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Date: 11/12/2019 7:05:00 PM
Quite a steamy tea pot, Jan, congrats on your win. Hugs, John
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Date: 11/12/2019 7:01:00 PM
Haha! Jan great win!;) Congrats!;)
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Date: 11/12/2019 6:55:00 PM
you are so great at these, jan! this time, i guessed where you were going, but it didn't take away from my delight and enjoyment at how you pulled it off...
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Date: 11/12/2019 6:49:00 PM
Ah yes Jan … there's so much in life that can be give and take; but not with a kettle, a life necessity to the highest - enjoyed Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 11/12/2019 6:38:00 PM
Congratulation on your Win! Okay sis you have to stop writing perfect poems, lol GREAT JOB SIS!!
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Date: 11/12/2019 6:28:00 PM
If you could translate this into Japanese, you should have a profitable winner! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/12/2019 2:36:00 PM
Jan!! I'was getting all hot and bothered there for a while. Great poem, great ending. Good luck in the competition..Ron xx
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Date: 11/12/2019 4:08:00 PM
lol Thanks Ron:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2019 12:13:00 PM
- Mammamia ... my reading glasses were dewy ... love it, Jan :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/12/2019 12:19:00 PM
lol Anne-Lise I hope Bobby doesn't think its too steamy lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2019 11:53:00 AM
perfect kettle that gets us hot :) love the poem, good luck in the contest. Hugs my friend
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Date: 11/12/2019 12:04:00 PM
thanks so much for the comment Eve and congrats again on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2019 11:31:00 AM
Garage sale or not, don't get rid of this old kettle, Jan. LOL
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Date: 11/12/2019 12:04:00 PM
lol Line - we still have our old whistling kettle in case we get a powercut:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2019 9:34:00 AM
Ma & Pa Kettle...quite the steamers lol...great ending Jan...love ya babe...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 11/12/2019 10:41:00 AM
lol WW and so delighted for you with your recent success with POTW:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2019 9:22:00 AM
I love how you did this, you had me fooled. Really clever Jan. This was Terrific with a capital TEA. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 11/12/2019 10:42:00 AM
Thanks Chris oh how I love turning my kettle on first thing n the morning - bit of poetic licence this one doesn't whistle, but the previous one used to sit on the gas hob and whistle when the water was ready:-) hugs Jan
Date: 11/12/2019 9:04:00 AM
Great personification Jan...steamy
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Date: 11/12/2019 12:40:00 PM
thanks so much TS I hope Bobby likes it and its not too steamy lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2019 8:58:00 AM
Ha ..old kettle! What a humorous poem. Great Jan.
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Date: 11/12/2019 12:41:00 PM
thanks for being the first to comment, so lovely to see you Rajat:-) hugs Jan xx