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You may be getting on in years but several times a day I reach out to caress you of course, I know all the right buttons to press to get you going As the temperature rises you start to get so steamy When you reach boiling point I hear you whistle, Gee, I can’t wait to get my hands on you I rush over to grab you Oh man, you are so darn hot as I lift you up hot fluid comes gushing out Even after all these years you’re still the one to quench my desires - how I love my old kettle! Metaphor of Love Poetry Contest Sponsored by Bobby May 11/12/19

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Paul Schneiter

Date: 12/26/2019 7:08:00 PM

Jan, I could have sworn you were writing about something else, then you took that U-turn--to an urn. Another simmering classic! Hugs, Paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:16:00 PM

lol thanks Paul I do like to write with a twist from time to time. I'm glad to be back writing I lost my muse for a month:-( hope you are well my friend have missed seeing you around:-) hugs Jan x

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/25/2019 4:35:00 AM

This is wonderful. I will never look a a kettle in the same way. Need coffee now. Hot love and satisfaction many times a day. Kind wishes, Kai

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:17:00 PM

thanks so much Kai:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/15/2019 12:33:00 PM

Hi Jan, this reminds me of Lindsay Lauries poem, a twist in the last line - a very clever witty poem and I am sure best for a win. Such passionate words of love - all for your kettle - had a good laugh. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:19:00 PM

You have made my day with your comment Thanks so much Jennifer:-) hugs Jan xx

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/14/2019 9:16:00 AM

Good one Jan, fun pen indeed! is the kettle still fully steamed!?

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:22:00 PM

thanks so much Gordon:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/13/2019 6:32:00 AM

Back with well deserved congrats, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:22:00 PM

thanks so much Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2019 4:56:00 AM

- No surprise, Jan :) - Congratulations on your 1st place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:25:00 PM

thanks so much Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenish Somadas

Date: 11/13/2019 12:36:00 AM

Personification at best.. Congrats..

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:25:00 PM

thanks so much Jenish:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 11/12/2019 7:53:00 PM

Back with a big congratulations on your 1st place win,,, hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:33:00 PM

thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/12/2019 7:13:00 PM

clever penning....great win, congrats :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:33:00 PM

thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

John Gondolf

Date: 11/12/2019 7:05:00 PM

Quite a steamy tea pot, Jan, congrats on your win. Hugs, John

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:35:00 PM

Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/12/2019 7:01:00 PM

Haha! Jan great win!;) Congrats!;)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:42:00 PM

thanks Brenda:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/12/2019 6:55:00 PM

you are so great at these, jan! this time, i guessed where you were going, but it didn't take away from my delight and enjoyment at how you pulled it off...

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:42:00 PM

thanks Ilene, you know me so well lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/12/2019 6:49:00 PM

Ah yes Jan … there's so much in life that can be give and take; but not with a kettle, a life necessity to the highest - enjoyed Jan - Lindsay

Bobby May

Date: 11/12/2019 6:38:00 PM

Congratulation on your Win! Okay sis you have to stop writing perfect poems, lol GREAT JOB SIS!!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:43:00 PM

thanks Bobby:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/12/2019 6:28:00 PM

If you could translate this into Japanese, you should have a profitable winner! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 12/26/2019 7:43:00 PM

thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 11/12/2019 2:36:00 PM

Jan!! I'was getting all hot and bothered there for a while. Great poem, great ending. Good luck in the competition..Ron xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2019 4:08:00 PM

lol Thanks Ron:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/12/2019 12:13:00 PM

- Mammamia ... my reading glasses were dewy ... love it, Jan :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2019 12:19:00 PM

lol Anne-Lise I hope Bobby doesn't think its too steamy lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 11/12/2019 11:53:00 AM

perfect kettle that gets us hot :) love the poem, good luck in the contest. Hugs my friend

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2019 12:04:00 PM

thanks so much for the comment Eve and congrats again on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2019 11:31:00 AM

Garage sale or not, don't get rid of this old kettle, Jan. LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2019 12:04:00 PM

lol Line - we still have our old whistling kettle in case we get a powercut:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/12/2019 9:34:00 AM

Ma & Pa Kettle...quite the steamers lol...great ending Jan...love ya babe...^WW^ :o)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2019 10:41:00 AM

lol WW and so delighted for you with your recent success with POTW:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 11/12/2019 9:22:00 AM

I love how you did this, you had me fooled. Really clever Jan. This was Terrific with a capital TEA. Best wishes in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2019 10:42:00 AM

Thanks Chris oh how I love turning my kettle on first thing n the morning - bit of poetic licence this one doesn't whistle, but the previous one used to sit on the gas hob and whistle when the water was ready:-) hugs Jan

Ts Poetry

Date: 11/12/2019 9:04:00 AM

Great personification Jan...steamy

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2019 12:40:00 PM

thanks so much TS I hope Bobby likes it and its not too steamy lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/12/2019 8:58:00 AM

Ha ..old kettle! What a humorous poem. Great Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/12/2019 12:41:00 PM

thanks for being the first to comment, so lovely to see you Rajat:-) hugs Jan xx