Hot Coals

There was a virile freight train from South Bend A sexy caboose he dared to befriend -- He said, "You're my dream" And let out some steam -- Then poured all his hot coals in her south end

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Bobby May

Date: 9/13/2019 12:24:00 PM

LOL, Gershon stop showing me up!! Put me on the right track!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/13/2019 1:00:00 PM

---as soon as I myself get untracked. LOL. ~ gw

Chris Green

Date: 9/13/2019 9:15:00 AM

This one is definitely on the right track, be careful, there's a tunnel ahead. : )

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/13/2019 11:39:00 AM

Very, very clever comment, Chris. Enjoyed it. (Hey, I could have said, 'clever crack,' but let's not go there...) Cheers, Gershon

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/12/2019 8:52:00 PM

Hello Gershon … there's not a lot to say Gershon, but be wary of those hot coals - catch you soon Gershon - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/12/2019 9:51:00 PM

Perhaps we can say, 'Bearing coals for Newcastle,' or some such. Thanks for commenting, gw