Gershon Wolf Poet Limerick

Hot Coals

There was a virile freight train from South Bend
A sexy caboose he dared to befriend --
   He said, "You're my dream"
   And let out some steam --
Then poured all his hot coals in her south end

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Bobby May September 13, 2019 at 12:24 PM LOL, Gershon stop showing me up!! Put me on the right track!! Gershon Wolf September 13, 2019 at 1:00 PM ---as soon as I myself get untracked. LOL. ~ gw

Chris Green September 13, 2019 at 9:15 AM This one is definitely on the right track, be careful, there's a tunnel ahead. : ) Gershon Wolf September 13, 2019 at 11:39 AM Very, very clever comment, Chris. Enjoyed it. (Hey, I could have said, 'clever crack,' but let's not go there...) Cheers, Gershon

Lindsay Laurie September 12, 2019 at 8:52 PM Hello Gershon … there's not a lot to say Gershon, but be wary of those hot coals - catch you soon Gershon - Lindsay Gershon Wolf September 12, 2019 at 9:51 PM Perhaps we can say, 'Bearing coals for Newcastle,' or some such. Thanks for commenting, gw