Caren Krutsinger Poet Rictameter

Hot Bread

Hot bread
Can’t wait
Mom has on her apron
She was up at four this morning
A delightful smell comes from the kitchen
Peeking in the oven window
Salivating big time
Watching it rise
Hot bread!

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Brandy Nicole August 18, 2018 at 10:49 PM Yummy!! If you are making some fresh bread- then I am on my way. :) Brandy Caren Krutsinger August 19, 2018 at 12:22 AM I have made myself hungry for hot bread now!

Kim Rodrigues August 18, 2018 at 5:59 AM Mmm! Caren Krutsinger August 18, 2018 at 8:54 PM I almost bought some bread dough today after thinking about it.

Sand Blown August 18, 2018 at 1:39 AM owwwaaa....turn me on : ) Caren Krutsinger August 18, 2018 at 4:59 AM I know, right?

Aqua Marine August 18, 2018 at 1:21 AM Ooooo.....I can smell the aroma all the way over here...brought back great memories of my mums baking too. Yum! I love the form of the poem too- takes some effort to get it right. Caren Krutsinger August 18, 2018 at 5:00 AM I am trying it today with lots of other subjects too because it is fun to try new things.