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Hot Air Balloon Ride

Weightless, we lift up like a bubble, softly, smoothly, so seamlessly that motion could go unnoticed with closed eyes. Wide awake, grass blades fade into one asymmetrical green block. Evergreen tree tops sway as a forest wave and we wave like celebrities at the intricacies below. Pale yellow hay aligns these pristine green patches as soundless tractors gather summer's last harvests. A gray pavement maze of smoke puffing industrial buildings and clustered suburbs texture a separate scene like game board houses, roofs in muted tones. Silent vehicles seem as child's toys, gliding like our imaginations and the easy lift of hot air's gauge as we drift higher, hovering at the skyline's level to reach distant cities with our awestruck eyes. The Space Needle is spotted afresh against azure air and Lake Washington is seen in its entirety, teeny boats assail like baby ducks welcoming these guests as a postcard homebound. Mountains' shadow crevices revel an artist's best rendition, depth unspeakable. Like giants we seem, overlooking a make believe world that we could overtake. Wicker basket thigh high at the opening, one assertive lean could be one's demise. How fragile are our mighty lives. We drift downward as seamlessly and controlled as the flaming whoosh between this manmade nylon fabric, woven like a rainbow's reach for gold, that holds our heedlessly trusting beings as magically as the land of Oz. Now a speck so small, landing amongst the level open field, we yield our hearts to the creator of it all. 11-13-2020 What Have You Kicked Off On Your Bucket List Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 12/8/2020 12:27:00 PM
i wouldnt have the courage to embark on a hot air balloon ride! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2020 5:02:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 11/14/2020 2:43:00 PM
Now it’s become a great memory. I’d love to try it one day, I hope. A great poem Juliet, I enjoy reading it :)
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/14/2020 4:54:00 PM
My husband and I did it for our 10 year anniversary. It was a great alternative to sky diving. Our conductor had a really sleek curly mustache and he reminded me of a character from The Wizard of Oz.
Date: 11/13/2020 5:49:00 PM
...sounds like a great balloon ride....but the 'hot air' story got left out....did you see aliens or something : ) stan sand
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2020 8:41:00 PM
It's mentioned once, but there wasn't much to say about that from my experience. I'm not a very technical person, so the scene was etched in my memory more that the mechanics of it. I've yet to see aliens, but that could be a bucket list item.
Date: 11/13/2020 12:44:00 PM
So happy to see you posting... A beautiful philosophical journey... I think I would be too scared to go on a hot air balloon..
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2020 8:37:00 PM
Thanks, for the encouragement, Silent One. I'd lost interest in writing, but your little nudge made me give it another try.
Date: 11/13/2020 11:16:00 AM
Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 11/13/2020 8:36:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Rico.

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