Hot Air Balloon Ride

Weightless, we lift up like a bubble,
softly, smoothly, so seamlessly
that motion could go unnoticed 
with closed eyes.
Wide awake,
grass blades fade
into one asymmetrical green block.
Evergreen tree tops sway as a forest wave
and we wave like celebrities
at the intricacies below.
Pale yellow hay 
aligns these pristine green patches
as soundless tractors gather summer's last harvests.
A gray pavement maze 
of smoke puffing industrial buildings
and clustered suburbs texture a separate scene
like game board houses, roofs in muted tones.
Silent vehicles seem as child's toys,
gliding like our imaginations
and the easy lift of hot air's gauge 
as we drift higher,
hovering at the skyline's level
to reach distant cities with our awestruck eyes.
The Space Needle is spotted afresh against azure air
and Lake Washington is seen in its entirety,
teeny boats assail like baby ducks
welcoming these guests as a postcard homebound.
Mountains' shadow crevices revel
an artist's best rendition, depth unspeakable.
Like giants we seem,
overlooking a make believe world
that we could overtake.
Wicker basket thigh high at the opening, 
one assertive lean could be one's demise.
How fragile are our mighty lives.
We drift downward as seamlessly
and controlled as the flaming whoosh
between this manmade nylon fabric,
woven like a rainbow's reach for gold,
that holds our heedlessly trusting beings
as magically as the land of Oz.
Now a speck so small,
landing amongst the level open field,
we yield our hearts to the creator of it all.

11-13-2020
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Allison Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 12:27 PM
i wouldnt have the courage to embark on a hot air balloon ride! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Agustin Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 5:02 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Downing  Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Now it’s become a great memory. I’d love to try it one day, I hope. A great poem Juliet, I enjoy reading it :)
Ligon Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 4:54 PM
My husband and I did it for our 10 year anniversary. It was a great alternative to sky diving. Our conductor had a really sleek curly mustache and he reminded me of a character from The Wizard of Oz.
Blown Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 5:49 PM
...sounds like a great balloon ride....but the 'hot air' story got left out....did you see aliens or something : ) stan sand
Ligon Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:41 PM
It's mentioned once, but there wasn't much to say about that from my experience. I'm not a very technical person, so the scene was etched in my memory more that the mechanics of it. I've yet to see aliens, but that could be a bucket list item.
One Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 12:44 PM
So happy to see you posting... A beautiful philosophical journey... I think I would be too scared to go on a hot air balloon..
Ligon Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:37 PM
Thanks, for the encouragement, Silent One. I'd lost interest in writing, but your little nudge made me give it another try.
Leffanta Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 11:16 AM
Well done! Aloha! Rico
Ligon Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:36 PM
Thanks for your visit, Rico.
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