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Hot Air - For Contest

HOT AIR/senryu hot air darkly still heavy stench of guilt hanging all eyes fixed on me John G. Lawless 7/15/2015 for- Senryu of Being Misjudged Poetry Contest sponsor – Marvin Celestial

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Date: 7/28/2015 7:45:00 AM
Hi John: WOW! I loved your choice of words! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/28/2015 12:39:00 AM
And back again wid big congrats n another read John!
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:52:00 PM
JOHN, congratulations, awesome sneryu. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 7/24/2015 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win a seven. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/24/2015 8:32:00 AM
This made me smile John:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/18/2015 7:31:00 PM
hmmm, this one can be taken two ways. I will take it the funny way and say LOL!!
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Date: 7/16/2015 2:43:00 PM
nice John I feel guilty just having read it. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/16/2015 9:53:00 AM
John, a wonderful 7, darkly beautiful and thanks for visiting my poem, Haiku 13
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Date: 7/15/2015 10:21:00 PM
Wonderful senryu John! Sure to do well, best wishes!
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