Hospital Head First Draft
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First draft
Why did my head wake up in the hospital?
It’s feeling very funny
Maybe the sky made it fuzzy - or clear?
On it’s own trajectory
Sleep has done it’s distortion backwards
Minutes seem hours, hours don’t seem minutes
Maybe it’s on a mission
Figure things out!!
Maybe it’s protesting
It wants to be alone
It’s consolidating
It wants its time
Copyright © Payge Terner | Year Posted 2024
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