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August is keeping an eye on A randy Leo the Lion Out of the sky Virgo dropped by With a comet from Orion

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Date: 7/25/2020 1:21:00 PM
Hello Rico Leffanta, I like this poem you created. Virgo dropped by with comet. i like this line. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/26/2020 12:30:00 PM
Hello Rico Leffanta, Oh I see. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/26/2020 12:12:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico
Date: 7/25/2020 8:47:00 AM
So creative, especially that 'randy lion' line - quite the heavenly match-
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/25/2020 3:24:00 PM
Lionesses find the food whilst lions save their strength to provide an apt "reward". Lions are renown for killing their offspring to bring females into heat again, hence more randy than regal! Aloha! Rico