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Horror of War

A painted sky weeps under a new sun Scattered gray clouds remind life's course has run A field of mud last place my soul shall dwell Its pain is reflected by my eye's swollen well They pour out salted streams to their end As my mind travels to days and years I'll not attend Nothing left to do but let my heart be content I'll wait for last breath without prayer or testament On far ridge bodies quiver some lay still Lives gave for this field without ill will We die in this place so far from home A trumpet will play taps, silence will moan Tomorrow will come, our bones will decay Buried beneath mud and blood we'll stay This place of hallowed ground, once pristine Sad thing is, most of us are only nineteen 10/5/18 contest Fiction-October 2018 writing challenge sponsored by Dear Heart aka Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/26/2018 10:42:00 AM
Frederic, this touched my heart although fiction it rang sadly of a truth that played out over and over and that music is divine. Well done and congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Date: 10/26/2018 4:12:00 PM
thank you, my friend, yes it is sad and thank you for my placement in your contest
Date: 10/7/2018 12:23:00 PM
such a compelling write which pierces my senses, especially the last line, frederic... grreat job!.. huggs
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Date: 10/7/2018 9:33:00 AM
A beautiful portrayal with words of a horrific thing that should never have to be in these "civilized" days. It's fiction and yet it is sad reality for too many! Nicely done
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Date: 10/6/2018 8:51:00 PM
A truly intimate and harrowing portrayal, Frederic. Sadly, but ever so beautifully, your poem, expressed with tender sensitivity, sheds light upon a soldier's last thoughts and breaths. Your last line is stunning in its impact to end your superb and poignant piece. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/6/2018 8:33:00 AM
Wow, this is very powerful Frederic. You have shown it well. Have a nice day :)
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Date: 10/6/2018 4:00:00 AM
Very beautiful poem, anyone who has seen war knows this is true! I great tribute to those who have fought.
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