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Horn of Pain

You don’t know me, but you know the sound of my horn Bleak are the notes — even bleaker, when you hear those notes, is the sound of your pain When you step into my smoky, ocean side atmosphere, you’re attracted to the wails Sinking hearts, that has taken on too much emotional water, can be buoyed in a sea of tears when listening to my dirge dirt digging horn My lips love blowing out the anguish, your ears love dancing to the hurt This horn of mine wields power like an ax ... Blue waves of sharp melancholy astral vibrations, compels you to order another glass of liquid happiness to drown in your troubles Sweet seductive pleasure charming you with burning melodies of intense sorrow Another set of speechless pain you desire my horn to play ... but I have too much to declare Entry: The "Bleaker the Better" contest. Sponsored: By Julia Ward Dated: June 7, 2017

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Date: 7/1/2017 9:48:00 PM
That's really bleak...well done for the contest! :)
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Date: 6/7/2017 5:34:00 PM
Sounds like you are writing about Miles Davis, "Kind of Blue" A most enjoyable read, Freddie. I love me some music:)
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Date: 6/7/2017 3:45:00 PM
Bleak for sure Freddie, best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 6/7/2017 11:33:00 AM
Wow this is a great poem Freddie. Very well done :)
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